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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 10:30 am Title: Deliverance...

So happy with the verdict.  Great chapter.  Love this story.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2019 11:27 am Title: ...Reality, The Sting of the Wasp is Soothed by Food

RECAP:  “As is customary, we allow ten minutes before the court is cleared, just in case they reach the verdict quickly.”   All eyes turn to the clock...

Okay, gotta say you were a little evil, here. The suspense is overpowering.

Craig and Jen almost made a huge mistake. Good thing they listened to Justin and got their heads out of their asses in time.

B/J need to be make up a special announcement about their upcoming wedding to send to the scums known as Lindsay, Michael and Debbie, but informing them they are not welcomed. I can see it now:  BRIAN KINNEY MARRIES JUSTIN TAYLOR IN THE WEDDING OF THE YEAR!!!

Looking forward to more.

Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2019 2:29 am Title: ...Reality, The Sting of the Wasp is Soothed by Food

Wonderful chapter.  Can't wait for the verdict and the wedding.  Love your stories.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 8:52 pm Title: ...Reality, The Sting of the Wasp is Soothed by Food

I ssio agreed with Justin when he told his parents off they had been so supportive and to suddenly do a one-eighty like that was so cruel and hurtful, while also being a Deb, Michael, Lindsay thing made it even worse because it was like they were looking forward to using Brian and Abergin's pain for their own selfish reasons.


Emmett and Del knocking them down a oneness good but The Gaggle will be worse and so happy not them.


That dinner Craig and Jennifer brought sounds delicious and just the apology they needed to make to guarantee that all is forgiven and that Brian is accepted.


Gotta admire Justin's determination but a mustard colored cardigan was never going to fly with anyone Justin is a brilliant artist but his taste in cardigans is Atrocious!! lol


You Are So Evil To Make A Wait Again For The Verdict! ;)


Thanks for  the Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:11 pm Title: ...Reality, The Sting of the Wasp is Soothed by Food

The verdict should come in soon.  I always get so hungry whenever I read your chapters.  Yummy.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2019 9:08 am Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

Ooohh!!!  Tension is in the air!!!  Arthur kind of crucified Michael in his closing statement. But he definitely deserved it.

I had to chuckle at Anita's closing statement. Michael thought it was so positive, then confused at the end. Hey Dumby!!!  She was saying you were at fault.

Phyllis actually did good for Debbie. Although Debbie had a change of heart towards the end by telling about Jack and what Michael did to him, she STILL does not deserve to go unpunished. She spent YEARS making Brian's life hell. I really hope she gets jail time, too.

Well, now that I finally got around to reading this, I too, will be watching the clock - or is that updates?!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Devizes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 8:20 pm Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

loving this

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 6:31 pm Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

The jury will be back in less than five minutes.

What did Michael take from Brian's office that he hopes no one will ever find out and that Brian doesn't care is missing?

It has to be something that was once important to Brian but isn't anymore and it is something Michael would keep near but also hidden, perhaps something in plan sight that Brian never even noticed?

Perhaps Nancy won't feel so bad about being at the beginning since once the verdicts have been read won't she and Lindsay be charged too?

Or are they waiting until the baby is placed in Lynette's arms far away from Lindsay?

Oh Please Update Soon!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:12 pm Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

Getting so close to what Michael deserves.  Wonderful chapter

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:21 pm Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

Time to get justice done and for Brian to move on and start healing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:55 pm Title: On The Cusp of Impending Doom, The Brink of Happiness

Can't wait for the verdict.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 1:12 am Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

Far-reaching this fantastic story again and I wonder if the jury would ask for restitution from  Michael and Debra, and if Brian would like to donate it to help other abused kids and adults get help?

Shame Lindsay can't be forced to pay back the money she owes, Brian, Gus, Mel and Ronald!

How much could she have left now? :)

 

 

 

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 7:29 pm Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

So "ChristOnAfuckingBike !" *lmao...

Hotness is over to the top. In ted's voice "I admire your stories, they are all amazing" & awesome.

*BriTin bunny loves❤



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, this is always nice to hear.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 5:47 pm Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

Terrific chapter.  Things are just moving along so well.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 6:03 am Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

Whew! I always look when a story seems to be nearing the end, to check and make sure it doesn't say finished. Then, as I read your chapter title, I had to look again. Don't scare me like that!

Well, we had a couple of hotness moments, which is always satifying, but what we truly had, was the battle-axe got her just deserts. And about time. I had to chuckle at the fact that she's back to where she started from. I can't wait for her neighbor to see her and realize she lives there. Because I have no doubt, that when Nancy did the inspections, she was ruthless and heartless. Belittling. Well, it's payback, bitch. Gotta wonder who does inspections now. Wouldn't it be funny if it was Lynette, or Ronald, himself? Maybe, just for the hell of it, Robbi might offer to do it.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 12:19 am Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

Ha ha ha, Nancy going back to the start!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 6:12 pm Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

Yes Nancy you taught your favorite well and now she has surpassed the master by kicking your old Ass to the curb with more than thirty pieces of shillings, yes Mother Dear you taught your precious Lindsay when to save herself and toss you in the gutter with all the other trash.

Nancy is getting exactly what she deserves for treating Lynette as the burden and Lindsay into her, Lynette is moving on with her life with Ronald and Happiness by her side and Nancy has nothing but her memories to keep her warm.

Nancy taught Lindsay to be manipulative, conniving, sneaky, underhanded and cruel but it isn't much fun when the student turns on the Master, cause it means the Master has to really look inn the mirror and face the ugliness they coveted for years.

I can only hope Lindsay ends up in the gutter with Mommy soon too.

Yeah Gus is getting a new Name and Everyone is going to Tuscany!!

Wonder if that means Snoty Lottie will make her last appearance to get humiliated again? <giggles>,

Fantastic Update. Happy New Year

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2019 2:23 pm Title: To Quote Boyz II Men...We've Come To The End Of The Road

So Lindsay's mom is back to square one.  Gus gets a new name?  The same one that Brian shouted out?

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 3:38 am Title: Abergin, A Goose Gets A Giggle And The Final Realisation

Thank heavens for Memphis Abergin coming forward. He definitely needs redemption. What an awful bunch he grew up with. I do wonder why they treated him and did to him what they did, though. But who better to give counsel than Arthur, Anita and Phyllis. And based on the circumstances of the Abergin case, Arthur will resurrect a closing argument that will put Michael away for many years to come.

So Jack/Chris committed perjury on the stand because he didn't tell the whole truth, that it was more than a kiss.  Funny. Couldn't you see Michael's eyes bulge out, if Chris had confessed all. *still chuckling* It was even funnier that Ari didn't realize that Kevo had been in a 2 1/2 year relationship with Jack. Does Kevo play football, too? I was unsure about that.

Last, but not least, Justin summed it up for Brian, reassuring Brian that he was okay with Brian's childhood fling. “He was your past, I am your present and future... Just as it should be.

HUGS ~ Cathy

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 10:02 pm Title: Abergin, A Goose Gets A Giggle And The Final Realisation

Jack found His Justin in Kevo and now that he has testified he is finally at Peace while Michael will never have peace again lol

Deb is ready to face her punishment but I wonder if she thinks she will get one or two years while Michael gets many, many, many years?

Brian got rid of the past and now his present and future is Brighter than ever.

Fantastic Update :)

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 6:56 pm Title: Abergin, A Goose Gets A Giggle And The Final Realisation

I'm a little lost with the "Abergin" case: what does it have to do with Brian's case? Did Michael and Abergin exchanged their stories of abuse?



Author's Response:

Hey there, happy 2019 to you. With Abergin, he was the first PTSD related case that Trevor Morris - Brian's therapist - worked on and he would never tell him what made him attack his brother, therefore he went to prison, but having watched Brian's trial he has finally told someone the reason why. He and Michael have never met. Hope that clears it up for you.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 3:25 pm Title: Abergin, A Goose Gets A Giggle And The Final Realisation

Great update.  This story has the great twists and turns.  Just love it.  Happy New Year to all. well all except Mikey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 1:25 pm Title: Abergin, A Goose Gets A Giggle And The Final Realisation

That's a lot of information.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 7:26 pm Title: Surprise Surprise...A Wish and The Final Kiss Goodnight

This was so good. I know I'm a little late getting to this chapter - but it was totally worth the wait. Chris Hobbs, Hmm... Never would have thunk it.

For all the years that Brian protected Michael from the bullies and then Michael turns around and outs a gay boy, causing him pain, is just all kinds of malicious.

I had a good chuckle: he looks grey and seems to be almost bent double ...  as he almost cries as he is forced to remain standin. I gather Pip has been relentless in her training - Good For Her!!!

I was a little confused as to why the revelation of Chris caused Debbie to change her plea to guilty. Is it because she realized that Michael had done this, and she virtually allowed him to continue with this type of behavior?

I have a feeling you are winding this story up. For the record, I'm going to miss it.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 9:29 pm Title: Surprise Surprise...A Wish and The Final Kiss Goodnight

Debbie did the right thing and she will deal with the consequences.

Michael won't let go, but I guess he won't have the choice.

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