Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 5:33 pm Title: Repurcussions

David and Alexi's scene was tense and then, the sun appears behind the clouds. Hot sex in a very near future...

Brian playing guitar is quite surprising; did he write the song or did he adapt one?

Author's Response:

Whoops! Thanks, you have just reminded me I have missed an acknowledgement. This was adapted from the song Lay Lady Lay by Bob Dylan.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2018 5:39 pm Title: Repurcussions

It was Awws almost everywhere I read and Eww for the parts I had to read.

Just about everyone was so cute and sweet just made my heart flutter with happiness to read about so much love.

Then Ethan and Michael showed up and it made me nauseous with dread.

Those are such children fighting over a toy (Naomi/Noel could Never Be A Mere Toy!) despite there being others on the shelf <eye roll>

Can't Wait For Both Of Them To Get Theirs!!