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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2018 7:38 pm Title: Falling, Corkscrew and Totally Trying to Screw

I'm a little lost with Michael/Rodney: is it something you already explained and I don't remember or is it something you will develop later on?

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:00 pm Title: Falling, Corkscrew and Totally Trying to Screw

gotta say, I am completely squigged out with the idea of Michael coming on to Rodney. That is not something I ever want to envision. But WOW! what an unexpected twist! NOBODY saw that one coming I'm sure. All his past endeavors are really going t ocome back t ohaunt him. Between Jerry and rodney, everyone will be out to get hime adn rightly so. 

 

glad Ethan chose to walk away. One good thing about him anyway.

Naomi is gonna hit it big time with these new clients! That is awesome!

Oh this is at such a great point right now. Looking forward to the next installment.

well done!!

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

Yeah thought I woukd fling that one in...I was going to do a flashback but my fingers woukdn’t let me!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2018 12:53 am Title: Falling, Corkscrew and Totally Trying to Screw

Is it possible for Michael to become more of an idiot???  Oh yeah, in his case it it.  Great chapter.  Glad that for once Ethan might actually be ok.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 7:06 pm Title: Falling, Corkscrew and Totally Trying to Screw

Holy Smokes, Michael tried to seduce Rodney?!?!?!?! (Ewwwwwwww!!!!!!!!)

Ethan may have Finally done the right thing but it came too late, he will never be as successful as Justin.

Emmett was smart to record Michael's drunken rambling, I wonder if Rodney left Vic a document detailing why Michael turned on him?

Rodney left Vic a Million Dollars!!!

I don't think Michael is going to get away without some jail time and perhaps Marilyn and Vic kicking his Ass for that lie he will try to spew.

Brian and Justin will have most of the water evaporating with the heat they will be generating, a picture of both waterfalls should go in their bedroom so they can always cherish them forever.

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 2:27 pm Title: Falling, Corkscrew and Totally Trying to Screw

I never realized just how evil Mikey could be.  I do not like Michael, but I don't know if it was how the character was portrayed or how he was written?  He does however make for a perfect foil.  I feel sorry for Vic and Deb.  Love Noel.

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