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Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2018 2:36 am Title: You Eyes Don't Want to See...But Watch and Learn, He Doesn't Want You...He Wants Him

Bahaha!  I love Justin laughing about Michael having to watch them!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2018 9:55 pm Title: Swing Batta Batta Batta Batta Batta Schwing!

Michael is spiralling so fast that he won't see what hits him: he's going straight to jail.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2018 3:43 am Title: When it Rains it Pours...Guess Who Doesn't Have a Brolly

"the memory of a geriatric goldfish": hilarious!

Michael seems going down very quickly.

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2018 2:18 am Title: Save the Last Dance

Delusional David, couldn't stand him on the show, and he isn't any better here, LOL!  Love Daph and Cynthia!

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2018 3:16 am Title: This Is The Sound of Silence

I'm really liking this so far!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2018 10:45 pm Title: Swing Batta Batta Batta Batta Batta Schwing!

Much obviously loves being arrested so let's pile on more charges so he will never be free again.

Noel is really free from those awful people and he never has to think about them again.

I wish Ethan was being smart but he is really thinking of self preservation too bad he hasn't realized he more than lost before he even started.

Daphne and Justin had me giggling.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2018 4:41 pm Title: Swing Batta Batta Batta Batta Batta Schwing!

Great chapter.  Yeah, even evil Ethan is turning against the idiot.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2018 2:00 pm Title: Swing Batta Batta Batta Batta Batta Schwing!

Justin and Daphne got all the goodness.  Yummy.  Noel, Ivan, Phillipa and Dad confused me.  Michael on the other hand is asking for more trouble.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 7:13 pm Title: When it Rains it Pours...Guess Who Doesn't Have a Brolly

Wow great update.  Mikey is such an idiot and love how you portray him.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 4:48 pm Title: When it Rains it Pours...Guess Who Doesn't Have a Brolly

Michael just keeps sinking further and no one can save him because he just keeps making it easier for everyone else.

Noel/Naomi showed what power really looks like and it was Beautiful:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 5:40 am Title: When it Rains it Pours...Guess Who Doesn't Have a Brolly

I pity Michael's lawyer.  Hopefully something sticks to the sneaky pig.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2018 3:51 am Title: Your Sweetness Is My Weakness And Your Liking...

Yeah, go Debbie, get your man! They are so well together.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 7:48 pm Title: Smoke, Mirrors and Flatfoot

What does Michael have on his phone that is so important?

Carl is so enjoying this and so is everybody.

I hope Debbie will get a maximum of money so she can have some fun instead of working so much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 7:41 pm Title: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

How could come up with such description "crouching drag queen hidden hippo impersonation"? What a vivid imagination!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 3:48 am Title: Realisation and Acceptance

The net is closing around Michael and he is just getting that fact.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2018 3:36 am Title: Deliverance

Yes, sue this devilish person and make him realize that there are reactions to every action.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2018 12:50 am Title: Your Sweetness Is My Weakness And Your Liking...

Good for Debbie finally standing up to the idiot.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 6:40 pm Title: Your Sweetness Is My Weakness And Your Liking...

Ewww Michael was just spying on Brian and Justin?

That proves he was stalking them.

Noel and Daphne talking was so funny and Very, Very Interesting.

Brian and Justin spending time just being together is beyond sweet and what they need after finding out about Michael's ickiness.

Deb has the bids up to $170,000?

Damn Michael is stupid and not as knowledgeable about comics as he thinks cause Deb is raking in some Serious Bank!!!!

And Michael is ridiculous if he tries to pursue a lawsuit against Deb after he gets that email, but since Michael prides himself on being ridiculous I think this should be quite Amusing and very sad.

Yeah Deb getting her life in order!

Chyna and Sade are going to be so beautiful when they perform.

Can't Wait!!

Thanks for the updates :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 1:33 pm Title: Your Sweetness Is My Weakness And Your Liking...

So where was Mikey when he was taking those pictures?  There is not one redeeming thing about him.  It's good that Deb and Carl are getting along and even better that Brian and Justin are too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 6:50 pm Title: Smoke, Mirrors and Flatfoot

So what did Tinklebell find on Michael's phone that will Michael going so many interesting shades?

Naomi would be one Hell of a fierce lawyer in court Michael and Ethan should at least be Thankful about that.

Michael is certainly racking up his evil points isn't he.

As much as I don't want the show to be ruined I so want Mr Flabby Fat Flat Ass and Mr. No Ass to take their moment in the spotlight.

That way everyone can put the story up all over Liberty Avenue so Michael and Ethan can bask in it radiance, perhaps sending them copious copies of their Big Splash will make them feel even more Grand <evil grin>

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 5:43 pm Title: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

Brian, Justin, Ted and Blake made me go Awww, cause they were just so Adorable!!

Naomi is going to make Michael wish he lived on another planet and in another time zone when she gets through with him.

Ethan puts the Duh in Dumb and I can't wait for him to get squashed.

Michael has as much dancing technique as he does brains and this humiliation will be so epic he will have to get a face change to walk down the street lol

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 4:05 pm Title: Smoke, Mirrors and Flatfoot

Good update.  Any time Mikey is an idiot, I am happy.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

So funny, thinking of Brian & Justin with painted toenails and Brian doing the painting.  Such a clever idea.  Love this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 12:40 pm Title: Smoke, Mirrors and Flatfoot

Nice to see Carl showing up.  What is Michael up to now?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2018 12:22 pm Title: Girls Just Want to Have Fun

It's so nice that Ted has finally found love.  Now just what is Noel going to do that will take Michael down?

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