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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 12:46 am Title: Whisky Burn and Meaning It

Great updates, but I still don't trust Michael in anything he says or does.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 11:21 pm Title: Whisky Burn and Meaning It

Michael might just be ready to be called....A Responsible Grown-up <checks outside to see if unicorns are pooping rainbows> Is the world about to end? ;)

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 11:01 pm Title: Picking Jaws off the Floor...Both Court and Dance

It was a smart move to have Michael believe he no longer had his mommy or uncle forced him to see that actions have consequences and in life there are no safety nets or coddling mothers to cushion the fall.

Interesting Chapter :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 3:27 am Title: Abject and Honest...Really He Is...that Unicorn, Leprechaun and Pig in the Air are Purely Coincidental

Read both chapters to get totally updated.   Both were great.  Can't believe Michael is taking responsibility.  It is about time.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 4:09 pm Title: Abject and Honest...Really He Is...that Unicorn, Leprechaun and Pig in the Air are Purely Coincidental

Holy Crap!!!

Michael Woke Up and Found His Humanity!!

I am so shock that I do believe I saw a pig fly, unicorn grazing outside and a leprechaun skipping down the street.

Looks like Michael has a heart after all.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 3:35 am Title: Abject and Honest...Really He Is...that Unicorn, Leprechaun and Pig in the Air are Purely Coincidental

Wow.  Can't believe that Mikey's admitting the error of his ways.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2018 3:28 am Title: Looking at the Man in the Mirror...Hoping He Can Make a Change

Another fantastic chapter!  Thank you.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2018 7:24 pm Title: Are Pigs Flying, Unicorns Grazing Outside, Leprechauns Skipping Down The Street? No, This Is Michael Trying To Say Sorry!

Vic, Deb and Michael's apologies... What a pity for them to have him in the family.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2018 6:52 pm Title: A Short Sharp Shock Brings Realisation

Too bad they didn't hit each other; they are both too dumb.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2018 12:23 am Title: Are Pigs Flying, Unicorns Grazing Outside, Leprechauns Skipping Down The Street? No, This Is Michael Trying To Say Sorry!

Great chapter.  The idiot just never learns.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 5:18 pm Title: Are Pigs Flying, Unicorns Grazing Outside, Leprechauns Skipping Down The Street? No, This Is Michael Trying To Say Sorry!

Pigs fly indeed.  Just what is Michael really up to?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 4:37 pm Title: Are Pigs Flying, Unicorns Grazing Outside, Leprechauns Skipping Down The Street? No, This Is Michael Trying To Say Sorry!

If Michael wants people to take him seriously then he has to acknowledge every nasty thing he has done and actually be sincere when he apologizes, no one will take him seriously when he half-asses it and is about sincere as a chainsaw.

Apologising while also sounding condescending is not going to win any brownie points with anyone, plus its like he is trying to gloss over everything so he can instantly be forgiven <eye roll>

What A Maroon!!

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 10:21 pm Title: A Short Sharp Shock Brings Realisation

Great chapter.  Wow, Michael doing the right thing for a change.  Can he be trusted???

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 4:39 pm Title: A Short Sharp Shock Brings Realisation

Has Michael grown a conscious?

Are Pigs Flying, Unicorns grazing outside, Leprechauns skipping down the street???

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 3:00 pm Title: A Short Sharp Shock Brings Realisation

How odd that Michael was actually telling the truth.  Must be a first for everything.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2018 3:50 pm Title: Capitulation, Staking a Claim and Predator Becomes Pray

Great update.  Michel just never learns and that keeps the story so good.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 7:04 pm Title: Capitulation, Staking a Claim and Predator Becomes Pray

The scene with Adam, Justin, Brian, Cynthia and Ted: really daring!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Realisation, Compassion and Date Night Revelations

The scene with Michael was hilarious: he is so confident that he couldn't resist the fear of Emmett; Debbie should have let him dealing with his shit. Enough pampering.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:54 pm Title: Capitulation, Staking a Claim and Predator Becomes Pray

DAMNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gotta Admire The Way Justin Gets His Point Across <fans self while gulping ice water> you just know that scene is going into both Cynthia and Ted's spank bank lol

I knew Adam would go to Michael but the way he went was just dumb, so will he be committed for detoxing of his soul?

Michael is not going to settle...What A Shock! <eye roll>

Does he really think after his behavior and all the vile things he did that Deb and Vic are going to take him in?

What Crack Is He On???

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:24 pm Title: Capitulation, Staking a Claim and Predator Becomes Pray

Oh my, oh, my!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 11:39 pm Title: Realisation, Compassion and Date Night Revelations

Terrific chapter.  Happy that Michael is getting what he deserves.  Great writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 10:46 am Title: Realisation, Compassion and Date Night Revelations

Yummy meal.  Love how Emmett proved Micheal was a lying shit and seeing how much Drew loves Emmett.  How nice that Brian and Justin showed up in the end.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2018 3:47 am Title: Realisation, Compassion and Date Night Revelations

Okay Brian and Justin had me cracking up and I so needed that after reading the Michael parts.

He is so conniving and discussing that I don't even feel bad that everyone used intimidation to literally scare the Crap out of him<smirks>

He loves being a bully but can't stand when the tables are turned on him.

I agree with Ted just because Michael said he would do the right thing won't mean he will

What is a cowering crying baby one minute can be a demented revenge seeking bully the next, morning has a way of changing any weak willed man child's mind.

Ted, Blake, Emmett and Drew are two very sweet couples and good friends to everyone.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2018 2:04 am Title: Regrets...You Have and They're Going to Make You

Love it when Mikey is more and more of an idiot and the gang doesn't like him.  Great job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 4:01 pm Title: Regrets...You Have and They're Going to Make You

This quote "even if I have to pull his dick through his nostrils to make him!"!!! Excellent!

I love when Ted gets angry.

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