[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:13 pm Title: January 28
LMAO The Twinkies, I love this ongoing joke between them.
Author's Response:
Justin and his Twinkies...will Brian ever win?
Date: Jan 30, 2018 4:01 pm Title: January 28
I love this side of Brian and Justin's couple, when they tease each other with something else than sex. The Twinkies' running joke is one of them.
Author's Response:
I love inside jokes between couples; you have to have a little fun with each other, especially for the times where life seems to get in the way of your happiness.
Author's Response:
I love inside jokes between couples; you have to have a little fun with each other, especially for the times where life seems to get in the way of your happiness.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2018 1:49 pm Title: January 28
You've hit all the prompts it seems to me. An enjoyable chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: Jan 29, 2018 11:32 am Title: January 28
I think you hit the prompts. I loved this chapter. I like seeing them interact with people outside of their inner circle.
Author's Response:
This was a difficult one. It's a POV from someone that's not even a minor character; but really someone that made a guest appearance. Which you'd think would make things easier as you can take liberties with the characterization. But it also means you don't have a firm voice in your head. It makes for tough writing. Thanks! :)