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Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 12:26 am Title: February 2 (Part Two)

I was not expecting that, holy crapbags. I hope Justin realises it soon, and that Brian doesn't have to keep that secret from him for too long, Justin won't appreciate that!

Their painting :(



Author's Response:

My poor boys; I hated doing that to them, but it needed to escalate and well...

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 11:32 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

And the plot thickens.....

I just wanted to commend you on the emotion in this chapter.  I felt my stomach clenching as the sentences progressed.  I know Brian feels helpless that he cannot protect Justin and Sunbeam.

I can't wait for his confrontation with Michael.

Thanks for the update.

Hugs,
Jessica



Author's Response:

I will adnit that I was tense all the way through writing this part. And then when Brian was trying to console Justin, damn it, I teared a bit. They so broke my heart in this one.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:54 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

OMG. How could you let this happen to them? I am heart broken.



Author's Response:

I promise to make it up to them soon?

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:42 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

Oh wow it is scary to think someone hates Brian so much to damage anything of Justin’s that has Brian in it. Oh boy Justin is going to go ape shit when he realises it’s a personal attack and not random!



Author's Response:

Yeah, this is not going to end pretty at all for those reasons and more.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 5:48 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

Whoa! From stalking from afar, it went to destroying the loft: that's a major step in the creepy!

I hope Michael is not involved in this and that it's not his fault that the code of the loft has been used.

When Justin will realize what was the actual goal of the intruder, it will hurt him so much.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a definite excalation in the stalker's movements. But when the fantasy shatters for whatever reason, it makes for a very dangerous person. The code thing is still a mystery at the moment. And poor Justin, to find that out...it's not going to be pretty...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 2:41 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

Wow.  You put a lot into this chapter.  How did Deb get the code and who is the mystery man following Justin?  I have my suspitions but you never know.



Author's Response:

That is indeed a good question; one that Brian is determined to get an answer on.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 2:17 pm Title: February 2 (Part Two)

Stalker can't be Michael because Justin and the stalker made eye contact. Justin would have recognized him.

Do they own the building where no one else lives there? If not, had no one heard anything?

Maybe stalker doesn't know about Britin...yet.



Author's Response:

It is definitely possible the stalker doesn't know of it... And yes, they do. Thanks!

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