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Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2018 1:23 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

I AM RAGING, How dare Michael, HOW FUCKING DARE HE??????? Seriously, he is such an egotistical bastard and just wants Brian to himself. How is he finding out all of this, I can't see it being Carl!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

He really is a piece of work. And needs his ass handed to him!

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2018 4:09 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

My poor boys......this story is sooooo good. The highs and lows are so amazing and well paced and I love it. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Michael has cashed a check his ass can't cover. Brian is going to destroy him. 

Michael coming out of hiding to attack Justin makes me wonder how he got his information. Is he working with the stalker or did he trash the loft to make it look like Justin is the reason Brian could be in danger. 

Hope Brian chokes him out then put a restraining order on him and Ben since he hid Michael away from facing Brian the first time he verbally attacked Justin.

Ben should be included cause he is nothing but an enabler for Michael. 

Please update soon.....you got me on the edge of my seat after that heartrending cliffhanger.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Michael is indeed in hot water, and Brian is really not going to put up with this anymore. As for how he got the information, well that's a mystery Brian is definitely going to look into. The guilty parties will definitely get their asses handed to them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 6:37 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)

I'm wondering who told Michael. Brian or Carl? Either ways it was plain irresponsible to let such information out and I'm surprised it happened.

If it's Carl, I hope Brian will remind him about privacy and keeping information safe about a case. He shouldn't have said anything to the family, especially Debbie.

If it's Brian, I hope Carl will do the same.



Author's Response:

That is the question. It defnitely wasn't Brian. What exactly happened with Carl however is a mystery. But my guess is, a cop like him, even being retired; is not going to have loose lips. So how does Mikey know?

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 4:35 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)

I hate Michael, always have always will! I am loving this story. Sunbeam better be alright or I will never forgive you. Do what you want to Michael !

Author's Response:

No Sunbeams were harmed in the making of this story; Michaels on the other hand...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 2:59 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)

How dare Michael be so evil.  Please give Michael what he deserves and let Justin and the baby be okay.



Author's Response:

Mikey's beat down is definitely near.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 12:04 pm Title: February 4 (Part One)

Argh I want the next chapter really soon please please please! Omg Brian is going to invisarate Michael when he finds out



Author's Response:

Michael has just nailed the last nail in his coffin with this one me thinks.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:08 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

Oh Justin. Oh Michael. Oh shit.



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Yup, the shit has just hit the fan. Mikey better run while he can.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 11:02 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

Oh boy. I know you won't let anything happen to baby, but could Mikey get the baet down of his life from everyone?



Author's Response:

Mikey is definitely going to get what's coming to him.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 10:44 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

I can't wait till Brian confronts Mikey!  I hope he is brutal and makes him tell who he gave the loft alarm code to (although we know who it is!).

We don't have superbowl probs like you guys, altough I love to go shopping on FA cup final day, as the shops and roads are dead.

Please don't wait too long for the Mikey smackdown, as the suspense is killing me!

Deb



Author's Response:

That confrontation is definitely coming up here soon; as for the code, as Justin says, 'it's a mystery.' Shopping the day of iI've never tried; although, I can't imagine it to be too bad. But the days leading up to the Superbowl are a headache.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 10:11 am Title: February 4 (Part One)

Me neither.  Michael better leave town and never return.  Brian is going to kill him.

 I do hope Justin and Sunbeam will be okay.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I don't think leaving town would be enough. The country might be, but better he just leave the entire continent.

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