You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 8:50 pm Title: March 9

Sorry about RL don't worry about us , we can wait. You take care I do love this story and I WANT to know the SEX of Sunbeam. Just kidding I'll wait for that also Bye for now

Author's Response:

Thanks. :) RL is making writing difficult at the moment as I can't seem to keep my typical block of writing time open and encumbrance free. Hopefully this will clear up soon and I'll be ale to go back to my regular posting schedule. It seems to be holding off enough that I don't have to completely disappear yet. So, fingers crossed! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 4:06 pm Title: March 9

Oh, I loved this scene.  I'm glad Jenny has such a great realtionship with her Papa J. 

Brian is so damn romantic.  I love their song!!!



Author's Response:

Jenny was a fun challenge to write. It's difficult to get into the mentality of a nin-year-old girl. And Brian was just so sweet in this. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:55 pm Title: March 9

Love this close up and personal look into Jenny.  It's nice to know that she prefers Justin to her dad cause I do too.



Author's Response:

I can't even begin to imagine a selfish man like Michael doing a good job as a parent; he makes everything about him, and I just don't see that working well when, as a parent, you're expected to put all your childs needs first. Plus I've always loved Papa Justin in any guise. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 3:46 pm Title: March 9

Terrific chapter.  Love the interaction between Justin & JR.  Heaven knows she doesn't get that kind of love and encouragement from Michael & Lindsay.  And, could so easily picture Brian & Justin dancing and singing together.  Signs of a great writer.  Hope that RL treats you ok.  Will wait patiently for updates and your return.  We all have things in life that must come first.



Author's Response:

Both Lindsay and Michael strike me as far too selfish to be effective parents; especially this incarnation of them. They are both far to wrapped up in their needs, wants and desires to ever put their children first. And the boys were sweet in this vignette. And thanks! So far, while real life is making finding the time to just sit down and write difficult, so far, it hasn't necessitated my complete disappearance. Hopefully this will remain the case until things smooth out again. Thanks for your support and for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 12:30 pm Title: March 9

Poor Jenny to have a mother like Lindsay whom is never satisfied unless it's to her liking and a father like Michael whom is only satisfied when it's about him.

She'll find her true love when the time comes.

Brian amd Justin dancing and singing in the kitchen without a care as to who sees them. Now that's love and romance.

Nice job too with Justin explaining different forms of artistry for Jenny in a was she'd understand.



Author's Response:

She does seem to have it rough with those two; luckily she has her Eema and Papa J and Uncle Brian to pick up the slack. And I'm sure with good examples of love to see - Brian and Justin, Emmett and Drew, Ted and Blake - that she'll know what to look for when that time comes. Brian and Justin made me grin; and truthfully was based on a real life experience with a friend, whose very not-romantic boyfriend surprised her by doing something similar. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 9:17 am Title: March 9

Great chapter with Jenny's POV on her favorite couple; it's very revealing!



Author's Response:

Jenny was fun to write, and a little heartbreaking too with the things she revealed about group dynamics and how dissatisfying her relatiosnships are with Micahel and Lindsay. At least she has Brian and Justin to pick up the slack. Thanks for reading! :)

You must login (register) to review.