Date: Mar 25, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part One)
All that food looks so good. Love the rainbow fruit skewers.
Author's Response:
Looking at the pictures definitely made me hungry. I so want all of it now. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2018 1:42 am Title: March 22 (Part One)
A culinary degree and you write about Twinkies
All of the food looked wonderful favorites were Rainbow and French Toast Kabobs. Familiar with the other dishes. Fun chapter
Author's Response:
Hey! I'm not to blame for Justin's tastes! Actually, what happened with the Twinkies was, when I was making an outline for this story, I knew I wanted a running craving joke through it, so I asked my betas to give me a bad for you snack food, and Twinkies was the first thing they said. And all that food makes me hungry. I really need to eat...LOL! Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 24, 2018 5:48 pm Title: March 22 (Part One)
The stories from Jennifer were very funny, even if they made Justin uncomfortable. There was nothing really embarrassing. The broken arm was already a sign that Justin was very brave and not yet ambidextrous, otherwise he wouldn't have minded about his thumb. The COCKPORN was hilarious.
Debbie isn't refined and it seems not delicate at all; OK, it's only a doll, but it's quite disturbing.
Lindsay must feel like she should be the center of the attention, not Justin; he stole her place in Brian's life. Mel should get rid of her and go on with her life, for Gus and Jenny's sake.
Author's Response:
LOL! I loved those stories; poor Justin. Even if the stories aren't that bad, it's always mortifying when mothers pull out the 'I can't beleive my child did that' stories. I know my mother delighted in doing that. Yeah, Deb's handling of the baby was worrying, but I doubt she was that bad with Michael. It was just a perfect opportunity for a Michael bashing/joke. There is definitely something up with Lindsay, and no, she doesn't like being in the shadows. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 24, 2018 3:47 pm Title: March 22 (Part One)
What a great shower!!!! Could just picture all the things that were happening. Great writing once again.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I just did what I would want for my shower if I were ever to have one and had no budget, as I'm sure the boys didn't really have to worry about financial constraints. I admit it; it was a bit of selfish wish fulfillment. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2018 3:20 pm Title: March 22 (Part One)
I like how Justin got his yummies. Having all his secrets told was cruel but funny. What is Lindsay's problem. Is she upset because her shower wasn't as nice? I think you are right on the reasons Michael is the way he is.
Author's Response:
Brian to the rescue again. :) Mother stories, they are so mortifying when told at the time, and so funny in hindsight when you have your kids and suddenly understand their position. As for Lindsay, well, that will come out soon. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 24, 2018 1:22 pm Title: March 22 (Part One)
There's so many firsts, but what popped into my head would be the first time Justin or Brian got baby food or oatmeal thrown at them. I can picture the stunned look on either of their faces. Or if Sunbeam is a boy, the first time they get peed on while change a diaper. First haircut. First time either of them hear Dada. Just so many.
Jenn is funny when a bit tipsy. Commentary on Deb changing the dollbaby in reference to Michael, hystetical.
I think Justin may be in early labor and doesn't realize it. At least the nursery is set up. Perfect way to see the furniture for the first time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the firsts. :) I already had a couple of them on the list, but I will jot down the other suggestions. Jen is defintiely funny when she's had a few too many, or has she? And I couldn't resist a dig at Michael. He is my least favorite character. Thanks for reading! :)