[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 5:59 am Title: March 22 (Part Two)
Poor Brian Has to redo everything to make sure he doesn't suffer the wrath of Justin. He probably will anyhow the Twinkies in the favor boxes....brillant
Author's Response:
He does, but he knows it's worth it to make his Sunshine happy; and poor brian and those Twinkies, that's likely to come back and bite him on the ass later on if he doesn't watch it. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 26, 2018 10:49 am Title: March 22 (Part Two)
I can't stop laughing about the Twinkies making their way into the gift boxes. That has Brian written all over it.
For anyone who says that Brian doesn't love Justin, rearraging the nursery for him proves them wrong.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Brian is a sly little shit when he wants to be. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:59 pm Title: March 22 (Part Two)
Brian called Lindsay. Jealous and envious. As Brian said it wasn't up to him to make Lindsay happy, that was Mel's job.
So glad Brian can get the room back to the way he had wanted it before the mothers took over. Brian is so getting lucky after everyone leaves.
Jenn and her stories. Poor Justin.
Author's Response:
It always bugged me the way Lindsay always ran to Brian, expecting him to do the things she should have been relying on her partner to do; it's no wonder that Mel and Brian had such an acrimonious relationship with Lindsay always showing Mel that Brian was more important the Mel. Brian had always intended to do it that way; no way was he going to leave it like the moms had it and risk Justin's wrath. YOu gotta love mom stories. God, I hated when my mother would do that; and she took great joy in knowing it. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 25, 2018 4:13 pm Title: March 22 (Part Two)
Good chapter, but you did get things out of order. In chapter 83, the games were played and prizes passed out and in this one you are going to start playing games, but I love the story so much that it never bothers me. Or maybe there are more games to play. Hope your Beta is doing ok.
Author's Response:
Things aren't out of order. :) Think of these two vignettes as puzzle pieces. They are Justin and Brian's POV's of that morning and so are happening simultaneously. So in terms of the order of events for the day, the first part of Justin's POV takes place (him watching the set up), and then the first part of Brian's (discovering Lindsay's snooping) , then Justin's POV of the brunch, then Brian's POV of brunch, etc. I wanted to cover both of their veiws of the entire event, but I didn't want to just show the same scenes from different POVs as that is something always annoys me as a reader. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2018 4:03 pm Title: March 22 (Part Two)
I'm so glad that Brian is doing what Justin wants rather then what everyone else thinks should be done. Love his little chat with Lindsay.
Author's Response:
Brian had every intention of fixing it. He just couldn't do it that night because, by the time they mothers were done interfering, he knew that Emmett needed to do stuff for the party and needed to get Justin home. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 25, 2018 3:25 pm Title: March 22 (Part Two)
I didn't think Lindsey would dare going into the rooms. Even if Brian knows her true self, he must be disappointed to see what she has becomes.
I can't wait to see how Justin will react when he will see Sunbeam's room. At least, it will be based on his wishes.
Author's Response:
Lindsay has always struck as a bit entitled and the way she always barged into the loft as if she had the right to do so, just makes me beleive that she'd have no compunctions of going into the rooms at Britin without permission. And Brian is disappointed as anyone would to see a childhood friend change to such a degree. The baby room reveal is coming up next! Thanks for reading! :)