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Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 2:55 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Damn! #Truth!

This is the reason I love anti-Michael/Lindsay stories...love to see them get their comeuppance! I could devour chapter upon chapter of the stuff! You go girlfriend!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2018 7:27 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Go Justin , just wish Brian had been able to hear it all

You mentioned you were able to finf the fanFiction where Debbie gives Justin a bruise..could you share info here ,if it's in KD
Title and author. If it is in AO3 I will never find it UGH Thanks for all your hard work on this story and I do love it.

Author's Response:

Wish granted! ;) As for the story, I know I answered you on the Facebook page, but I haven't checked it in the last couple of days, so I'll post it here as well. The story was called Why Do I Love You? And it was by starlight; one of his/her older fics, so it's on the second page. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 9:13 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

O.............M..................F..................G!

I've always dreamed of a chapter like this. a full page full on smack down.

this was BRILLIANT and loved every word. justin was AMAZING!

Now...wouldn't it be fantastic if Brian was actually listening in on the whole thing!??!

Well done!

cheers

elaine



Author's Response:

Well I am very happy to deliver; on both points actually. ;) Thank you and thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 7:23 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Oh I do hope Melanie was lurking nearby and heard all this.  That will spell the end for Lindsay.  What she isn't aware of is that Blake also knows the truth.  Love how Justin let her have it with both barrels.



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin was very careful to say a friend and not mention Blake by name, just in case she tried to wiggle out of it. But, as we all know, she didn't get very far with that, now did she? ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 7:04 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Yes!!!!! A beautiful Lindsay smack down. Love this so much. 

Oh baby's first curse word and baby's first hated food

Thanks for the joy



Author's Response:

Justin really handed her ass to her, didn't he? And ohhhh...baby's first curse word; I hadn't even thought of that one! Thanks! And as always, thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:32 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

I love this story, it is one of my favorites!! I love the Lyndsey smackdown, please say the camera and recording was still on!!!! Can't wait  for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that you're liking it! :) As for the camera....well, I suppose we've seen what happened with that. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: jayjaykmm Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:20 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Go Justin!! Lindsay just got burn by a hot ray of Sunshine. Now i only hope the monitor/cam was on and everyone heard the conversation. 



Author's Response:

LOL @ burned by a hot ray of Sunshine. I really like that! As for the monitor, well, that conversation wasn't as private as she'd hoped... ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:03 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Have been reading for quite sometime and I must say DAMN!!!!!!!!!!

When Justin Slaps A Bitch he really knows how to cut deep with no chance of healing.

Lindsay should've known better than to go toe-to-toe with Justin as a Wasp with years (So Many Years!) on Justin she was always with a amateur with no understanding of how to be a true Wasp.

Now we know the secret Justin and Blake share and why Justin loathes Lindsay (Justin could never Hate the flea bag, cause Hate requires passion and all of Justin's passion is reserved for Brian;)) and now she knows that Justin was never her pawn.

Justin achieved everything her evil little heart desired by sheer determination, faith, love and a backbone made of steel.

What good did laying on her back and being in her knees get Lindsay but a sore back and knees.

I so hope everyone heard and saw that on the monitor?

Why was she taking pictures of the mural?

Does Justin have plans for Simon and his friends?

I always wondered if Lindsay had something to do with Justin's paintings being destroyed?

Wow What A smackdown and it's only the start!!!!!:)



Author's Response:

Justin most definitely has a cutting tongue on him; and there is no bitch more deserving of a flaying. So many questions, and sadly you know what I'm going to say - you'll have to stya tuned for developments. ;) Lindsay really should have known not to take Justin on; he has demonstrated time and time again to be superior to her in every way and he doesn't even have to flaunt it. He just simply is everything she could ever hope to be and will never attain because she is too busy waiting for it to be handed to her rather than going out and making it happen like Justin did. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:22 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Pls, pls, pls, tell me the baby monitor was on or Brian heard all that, so that he can hand her her ass too?  This is so good.

Deb



Author's Response:

Well something certainly was on and preserved it for posterity... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:18 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Sour grapes, but the result is delightful; I love Justin in pit bull mode; he doesn't let anything go and strike every time he can.

Great job: that explains so much why Justin is so mad when Simon's name is in the air.

I hope the video channel is still on and that everybody in the media room heard the exchange.



Author's Response:

Justin did give her a good verbal thrashing. He may have sat on it for a while, but when push comes to shove, he will always fight back. It's sad that Lindsay and Michael always seem to forget that trait in his personality. As for the video...stay tuned. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:17 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

That was harsh. Do it again. Haha 



Author's Response:

Well, I do hope you like the next installment then. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Dailani Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 12:25 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Three words: motione sensor camera)) 



Author's Response:

Those are some very important, key words to remember. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Wow! Love when Justin delivers a smackdown. He does it so well.

What was she doing taking pictures of the nursery for? The mural was a lame excuse. Stupid woman.

I did learn one thing though, whomever the stalker is, and Simon seems most likely now because Justin is the one that got away. Whomever it is Lindsay is the link.

I surely hope Brian was out in the hallway listening to all the was being said. You know, he would have been coming to see how his Sunshine was doing and heard voices coming from the room.

Wouldn't want Lindsay to try running to him saying how badly Justin hurt her feelings. Not that Brian would care but you know how she is.

Yay Justin for kicking her out.



Author's Response:

That is an interesting question; why would she be taking pictures... Well, we don't have answers for that yet I suppose. But at least Justin finally got all that bitterness of his chest and, hopeully, Lindsay will think twice about messing with him. And as for Brian listening in, well, he doens't have to be outside the door to learn everything. ;) But yes, Lindsay is exactly the sort to try that, hoping to drive a wedge between them. I doubt she'll succeed. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)

Go Justin!!!!  That was a very long time coming.  Thanks for that update.



Author's Response:

He definitely let her have it. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:44 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)

WOW, this chapter was some of your absolutely best writing.  Getting the feelings that Justin was saying across is amazing.  Love when Lindsay gets what she deserves, but usually people still keep the gloves on.  You took them off and came out swinging.  FANTASTIC job.  Now you can take on Michael if necessary.  And, a good story can't always be sweet.  A little spice can go along way.  Just wish Brian had been standing outside the door listening to his "Sunshine" give it to her.



Author's Response:

Justin definitely didn't hold back on Lindsay; although, with three years to simmer in the back of his mind, I'm not surprised he went off on her. And Michael; I keep hoping he'll just go away, but he just k eeps shoing up lie a bad penny. As for Brian...well, we all know that he'll hear about it in the end... Thanks for reading! :)

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