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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

Brian was bewitched, Justin was bothered, but now neither of them are bewildered.  



Author's Response: LOL :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 2:46 am Title: Chapter 6

At least he'll know who sent it.



Author's Response: True.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2018 1:54 am Title: Chapter 5

How embarressing when Justin finds out he's wrong.



Author's Response: It could be.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay, Brian's getting it.  What to do?   Maybe use Gus?



Author's Response: Wait and see.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

That is the question.  What is Brian going to do?



Author's Response: Any ideas? LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2018 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

Looks like Brian blew it in more ways then one.



Author's Response: Yep.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Shoes on the other foot.  Justin is becoming Brian.  Can't wait to see where you take this.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're intrigued by this premise.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:00 am Title: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter! It's great that Justin came to the loft so he was meeting Brian halfway.

Daphne helped a lot because she guessed RA wasn't for Ray.

Thank you for this story.



Author's Response: Thank you for the very nice comments.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 9:42 am Title: Chapter 6

Brian went in overdrive: chocolates, sappy songs and now a Valentine's card: if Justin wasn't so down, he would make fun of him and he would be right.

It's actually the only way Brian has to show how he feels, as he can't say the words.



Author's Response: You got that completely right.

Author's Response: You got that completely right.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2018 9:25 am Title: Chapter 5

Brian doesn't do romance and he hates explaining himself: how is he going to make Justin see what he wants him to know?

I fear that Justin will take some drug and will fall hard.



Author's Response: This is tough for them both.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

So relieved that Daphne came to talk to Brian: only her (and Debbie) could make Brian see that Justin is on the wrong path and he's killing himself slowly, but surely.



Author's Response: A lot of people care about Justin.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

After I finished this story and reviewed, I realized that the Rod Stewart CD is one of my favorites and you used the songs perfectly.  Just wanted to add that to my review.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm pleased you thought the songs fit well.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Brian is in an awfully tough situation: he feels that Justin decided not to fight anymore to get him and worse, he fights back to get away from Brian.



Author's Response: It's very hard for them both.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Justin is so right to get away even if it must be hurting; not as much as knowing that Brian invited someone to come later. Brian doesn't like to share Justin too much, but doesn't care to be shared.



Author's Response: Hurt before love.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

On one hand, I never understood why Justin told Brian that he knew what it was Brian wanted from him (during the great reunion in Brian's office), yet, he feels like this when Brian is acting as usual. Even if I can get how he's feeling, he told Brian he understood.

On the other hand, it's a genius move to make Brian aware that they both could act this way. Brian already had a preview when Justin took his trick after the "King of Babylon" contest. Brian's reaction was very interesting.

Let's see how you will make them deal with this "new" Justin.



Author's Response: That's the premise of this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 3:07 am Title: Chapter 7

A very different look at Brian & Justin and I loved it.  Great job.



Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's interesting to put them together in new ways.

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter. Brian deserves everything he gets! Lol



Author's Response: LOL Perhaps he does.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 8:23 am Title: Chapter 7

That was beautiful...amazing...loved it very much.

Thanks a ton for sharing.



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 7:41 am Title: Chapter 6

Awwww...brian is sweetheart...lols...lets not tell him that.

He is soo getting him back...soo romantic.



Author's Response: Definitely don't tell Brian that; he might stop.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 7:23 am Title: Chapter 5

damn...brian is the secret admirer not that Roy.

Come on brian ...do something romantic...shit like that.



Author's Response: You know that's hard for him.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 7:05 am Title: Chapter 4

Thanks to daphne...finely brian will open his eyes...great going...i hope brian will win justin back.



Author's Response: You know he will. lol

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 6:45 am Title: Chapter 3

Brian is missin his sunshine and sunshine is missing his shine..lols...justin is turning into another Brian.



Author's Response: Everything's topsy-turvy.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 6:27 am Title: Chapter 2

Yeah...get urself together Mr.kinney..before its too late.



Author's Response: Hope he takes your advice.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 6:04 am Title: Chapter 1

You go baby...* in Em's voice.

Lols..that was great..looking forward to read more.



Author's Response: Thanks, hope the rest of the story pleases you as much.

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2018 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

I’ve read this several times before it just gets better and better



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much.

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