Date: Sep 11, 2022 8:38 am Title: Chapter 34
This was a great story!! Loved it!!
Date: Aug 15, 2020 11:22 am Title: Chapter 34
did read it again
Date: Jul 30, 2019 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 34
I have read this one again now for the third time, so good!!. A sequel would fun fun for this one to carry on this great story!!
Liz
Date: Oct 27, 2018 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 34
Very sweet story. Thanks for writing. I’m still in awe at your prolific Brian. TAG
Date: Oct 19, 2018 9:15 am Title: Chapter 34
I love this story with no really anti characters. and Brian and Justin as independant as each other. Thank you
Date: Oct 19, 2018 5:45 am Title: Chapter 34
That was a very sweet ending. I like how you seem to put the name of your story in the last sentence of them. Other than Claire, this was a great chapter. I don't know where all the entitlement issues come with Claire, but she needed that knocking off her high horse, which Brian gave her. Claire is too lazy to go to college. College requires a lot of work and dedication, neither of which she has. I noticed she still didn't ask about her boys. I wonder if she has even been to see them.
I loved the name Vivian Victoria. My father's name was Victor, and I would have loved to be given that name. But Nope! My baby sister got it. Anyway, there wasn't a better way to honor Grandma Vivian, who was a true mother to Justin while growing up. And I loved the little speech Justin gave Molly and Nicholas about what this family's dynamics are now going to be. It would been nice to hear what Baby Vivian looked like. I'll just think lots of blonde hair, and eyes the color of green-with-gold flecks
I'm still trying to figure out what makes women look at Craig and forget the condom. OMG Deb! Such a classic thing for Deb to think of. But shes correct. So now Craig's went from 16 to a senior citizen. I guess if he can't pussy any other way... I loved to see what the old bat might do to him, if he should try to creep into another's bed after they're married...
Nicholas: Do I even need to answer anyone? Gus: I just eat. Justin: Nope. Sounds like Deb's house. If a person doesn't feel like carrying on a conversation, that's the place to go.
I noticed you only have two writing-in-progress stories. Anything else in the works? I'm not sure if you can develop a story from someone else's ideas, but Deb has some AWESOME Plot Bunnies listed. Unless of course, you already have your own thoughts brewing.
Thank you again for writing this and give us the enjoyment of reading it.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 19, 2018 3:19 am Title: Chapter 34
You have a nice way with words. I really liked this.
Date: Oct 19, 2018 12:23 am Title: Chapter 34
Vivian Victoria, What A Beautiful Name For A Beautiful Girl!
Nicholas might be able to achieve the unimaginable with Keegan, Brian and Justin found each other so anything is Possible :)
Fantastic Ending!!
Date: Oct 18, 2018 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 34
Another perfect ending. You manage to write the most interesting and different stories. Thank you. Love the baby's name.
Date: Oct 18, 2018 11:01 am Title: Chapter 34
Claire is unbelievable!
Beautiful names they chose for this little girl.
Thank you for this wonderful story; always a pleasure to take a ride with you!
Date: Oct 18, 2018 9:11 am Title: Chapter 34
Great ending to a wonderful story. As is my usual I will miss them, but know that they are happy.
Date: Oct 18, 2018 4:57 am Title: Chapter 34
The end of another one of your masterpieces!
I really enjoyed this story and I'm enjoying 'Finding Home' too.
Love your writing, as usual, and can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Thanks Star!
Hugs,
Deb