Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:09 pm Title: Epilogue
The end of one great story… Amazing writing-style, wonderful characterization with an awesome development in their characters and in their relationship! I must admit, I’m a little bit sad, but thanks very much for writing this and sharing it with us. And I hope to read something from you someday again. Warmest regards!
Date: Jul 05, 2018 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow! Brian’s letter is both so sad but also so beautiful. We finally get to know how he went through withdrawal. So sad when he admits that it still isn’t easy.
“So maybe there *were* some things Justin couldn't change, couldn't fix.” – I think Justin has already changed so much and went through some changes by himself. And one couldn’t say it better than you did: There are so many other ways to show someone that he’s loved than declarations of undying love, roses, and Valentine's cards.
Date: Jul 05, 2018 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for this scene where Brian lets Justin top. In my opinion, it was such a huge step for Brian letting someone, or not just someone but Justin top him and it could have been more mentioned in the show.
I really really love this more open-up Brian. Love this moment when he asks Justin why he lets himself being fucked by Brian again and again. “You’re Brian” – “And you’re Justin” Simple but so awesome!
"It's almost like we're leaving for our honeymoon." – :-)
Date: Jul 04, 2018 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
Even though it's bad enough, I'm grateful it's not quite as bad as in the show. And I’m so glad that Brian has already changed so much so that he is able to take care of Justin. I love this moment between them in the shower!
I love your writing-style! First, you manage to nearly make me cry with this so heartbreaking moment when Justin has his breakdown and then, Emmett’s beautiful description of their relationship and what Brian would to for Justin. So amazing!
Date: Jul 02, 2018 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG, this scene at the zoo is sooo funny. Again, would have loved to see this played by our favorite boys!
Every time, you write “Brian's shoulders slumped”, it breaks my heart… But Justin’s there for him and it’s good to see that Brian opens up, telling Justin this wasn’t his real dream. And then, Brian’s there for Justin, takes care of him… "No one gets to hurt you. No one." – So beautiful!
"I'm queer, Mom, and Sunshine here is the guy I fuck on a regular basis." – Again, would have loved to see this scene. Why couldn’t you be the one who wrote the scripts?
There are so many adorable scenes in this chapter… like their talk about their first night together, Brian’s birthday at Debs, the moment between Brian, Jennifer and her “grandson” :-) or Jennifer asking them about the “Bad night's sleep?", the talk about the strip… awesome!
And finally, the prom. I love, that you let Brian come there without being asked by Justin. He just knows how much this means to Justin and it’s also something he wants – great!
And then, after having the best three minutes of their entire life, it happens… And I’ve to admit, I couldn’t stop reading the next chapter before writing this review…
Date: Jul 01, 2018 8:39 am Title: Chapter 9
It’s so great they’ve already came so far. While Brian is able to admit more of his feelings and Justin is more demanding, it’s also great to see that Brian’s already not totally against being monogamous most of the time (and I think the most important part for Justin is, that Brian doesn’t fuck others right in front of him) and I think therefore Justin’s not as insecure as in the show so I hope there is no need for an Ethan!
He asked him to go to New York with him! How amazing! I still can’t stand the end of the show and I can’t understand why there couldn’t be a conversation between same similar to yours! After being more or less together for five years, after everything they went through and knowing how much they love each other… I still can’t understand
Oh, I love this scene at the restaurant and your writing-style. You let them be so cute and beautiful and hot and awesome together!
Justin and Brian at the zoo – funny to imagine and also so sad he never was there as a child. “Ask Brian”…. :-)
Date: Jun 30, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
They are so cute, so beautiful together. Hm, and I don’t know if there’s something wrong with me, but I wouldn’t mind watching either… Daph is one lucky girl! :-)
And again, so many known scenes which you turned into something better. And it’s amazing how Brian lets his walls down with Justin. Talking about his Dad, crying in front of him and let himself be comforted by Justin. A real heartbreaking scene. I must admit, I’m not a big fan of Michael, so I love to see that Brian opens up to Justin more and more.
You also turned the King of Babylon scene into something better. Interesting development and discussion at the end. So Brian is angry about himself, because it’s no more fun having anonymous fucks and also getting his dick sucked by someone else than Justin. I think it’s great :-) and I really like this demanding Justin and a Brian who is more able to admit his feelings than the Brian in the show! Can’t wait to read further!
Date: Jun 30, 2018 7:39 am Title: Chapter 7
So, Brian finally knew about Kip and what Justin had done. This was also something I was missing in the show. Would have been nice to see Brian’s reaction. And maybe it would have been important for Brian to see what someone, or better Justin is willing to do for him. There is no way one could say it better than “your” Justin: “We care about each other so much, we're arguing over it." – Beautiful!
"You might as well start keeping some of your shit here, anyway” – I love the way it develops between them!
Another thing I like so much more than in the show is your solution relating to Gus. If there is a legal way for all three of them to be a parent or a guardian, it would be the best solution for all of them. I didn’t liked that Brian had to give up his rights just to help Mel and Linds getting back together.
“He’s not my boyfriend, he’s my Justin” – Oh! I love their conversations and especially how you always manage to express Brian’s astonishment and awe about his own deep feelings for Justin but also about Justin’s feelings for him!
Date: Jun 29, 2018 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this scene at Woody’s. First, the untroubled tickling in front of everyone and then Brian’s reaction to this “hot guy”. I just love “your” Brian and how he develops. And I’m not talking about being monogamous, but respectful to each other. That was something I was often missing in the show. Brian fucking other guys in front of Justin or going after them like going after Brandon, was not only painful and disrespectful, but in my opinion pathetic for Brian – often using sex as a way to hurt Justin and to show him his place.
"all I know is that you're my best fucking friend and I keep fucking you” – Wow! So beautiful!
I’m glad that you let Brian be so honest with Michael. Also something I was missing at the show. Mostly, Michael was allowed doing or saying the most bullshit, while Justin had to took the blame (like with the cancer).
Date: Jun 29, 2018 9:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Again, there are many known scenes in this chapter, but I think you make them so much better. You let them talk more to each other and it becomes clearer and clearer how much Justin already means to Brian. It’s so beautiful to see how much they care about each other.
I was a little bit afraid of the prom, but I think when the prom will happen, they could be so much stronger than in the show. And, you change some things, for example Brian not going to the leather-ball or Justin not starting a fight with Hobbs in front o Woody’s… By changing this things, you change the future.
Just like you wrote “Inescapable” from Brians point of view, you wrote this story mainly from Justin’s and I think it’s great, but it would have been also really interesting to get to know some of Brian’s thoughts or how he went through some experiences.
Warmest regards!
Date: Jun 28, 2018 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
What an amazing chapter! There is so much happening and again, there are so many beautiful scenes. First, this moment when Debbie finds Brian draped across Justin. Then later the short talk between Deb and Justin… Would have loved to see this on screen. And then, such an amazing and thoughtful present! Their first “non-date”. Wow! So much better than an hustler :-) (I know, it was S2)
I do not really trust the peace yet and am afraid of the next relapse but I’m so glad you let Brian be so strong and brave, starting to fight against his demons. And it seems he is slowly accepting his feelings for Justin, allows himself to love and be loved.
No leather ball! Great - And I’m so happy that he stood his ground against Mel and her bullshitl. I hated this in the show. This provocations often led not only to Brian being hurt, but also Justin. And here, it would also affect Gus.
Like I said before, I love this chapter, your writing-style and especially how they get closer and closer!
Date: Jun 27, 2018 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
What’s about this non-kissing? There wasn’t an explanation or haven’t I got it?
I often wondered why Brian fucked Kip twice In the show, but who was Brian to say no to a naked guy lying in his bed… Justin’s so brave and matured. Must have hurt to hear that Brian has fucked Kip not only once, but he forgets about it because it’s more important for him to help Brian.
Although I felt very sorry for Brian’s relapse, I think Justin’s doing the only right thing he could do, telling Brian he loves him and would be there for him, but can’t take it anymore alone.
It’s great how you let Brian take this step towards Justin. “But even then you were an anomaly…” – Ridiculous romantic in his own way! So cute!
Date: Jun 26, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter! This time with more humorous moments. I love this whole scene at Em’s and the telephone call is priceless.
It's great how you let them getting closer again and even though Justin, who really wants nothing more than to be back with Brian again, doesn’t let him intimidate him too much and counters him. It’s really funny!
I’ve said it before, your writing-style is so amazing! This scene at the loft when they finally spend the night together again, is so beautiful and cute but also a little sad. How they act, what they say…
Also the end of the chapter really touched me. How they try, nearly force Brian to drink some alcohol ant not just accept a “no”.
Can’t wait to read further….
Date: Jun 26, 2018 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow great chapter. Your writing is amazing.
Date: Jun 25, 2018 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hej! After reading and falling in love with “Inescapable” I was looking forward to read another one of your stories. Wonderful first chapter. Again, your writing-style is amazing and you characterized them so well!
You choose an interesting and difficult topic. Not only have I had an alcoholic with a successful withdrawal in my family, also a good friend of mine died a few years ago because of alcoholism, so I know how difficult it is, not only to stop drinking but also to never drink again and nevertheless to have a normal life, a normal social life.
Justin is taking a drastic step. He is very brave and it’s great to see that he cares so much about Brian that he’s willing to risk “whatever” they have at this point of the story. And what a terrible and painful scene when Brian’s having those nightmares about his father (?) hurting his sister (?). Or this: „I fucking hate you”.
A good choice Justin confessed in Emmett – he’s a real good friend. And despite this difficult topic, you manage to bring in humorous moments as well.
I’m sorry about my long review, but there is so much going on in this chapter and I’m very curious how things will continue….
Date: Jun 25, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this story, very well written.
Thanks
Deb
Date: Jun 24, 2018 3:43 am Title: Epilogue
Perfection! I don’t know how I never read this before but it was so wonderful. This is now my second favorite fic, right after “Inescapable”. 😊
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2018 1:58 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww, what a great ending.
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2018 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
I always wondered what happened to Justin's trip he won. Now I know.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Please please pretty please can we get an update. 😊â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: May 08, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
Please please update love this story.
Date: Apr 14, 2018 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
Please update. It has been almost 2 weeks. Waiting patiently.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2018 1:47 am Title: Chapter 12
A story about graduation is wonderful. Love Emmett is this chapter. Shame he wasn't able to attend the graduation. Wonder where Craig is.
Date: Apr 01, 2018 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
The end: Brian is not even cringing at the idea of a honeymoon.
The scene with Justin toping Brian was hot and funny as Justin couldn't help himself and had to close his eyes not to see what he was doing; too much stimulation. The conclusion from Brian was promising.
I hope the trip to the Bahamas will be OK.
I also hope that Blake is going to get help.