Date: Jun 26, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter! This time with more humorous moments. I love this whole scene at Em’s and the telephone call is priceless.
It's great how you let them getting closer again and even though Justin, who really wants nothing more than to be back with Brian again, doesn’t let him intimidate him too much and counters him. It’s really funny!
I’ve said it before, your writing-style is so amazing! This scene at the loft when they finally spend the night together again, is so beautiful and cute but also a little sad. How they act, what they say…
Also the end of the chapter really touched me. How they try, nearly force Brian to drink some alcohol ant not just accept a “no”.
Can’t wait to read further….
Date: Feb 24, 2018 7:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Another amazing chapter: it seems that Brian got the message Justin had brutally given him. Brian has been the one reconnecting with Justin, which is highly unusual.
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2018 12:54 am Title: Chapter 2
I hate how they can't just take no for an answer when he says no to a drink.
So happy Brian took Justin back, but the no kissing has to stop.
Date: Feb 20, 2018 7:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story so far!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2018 2:02 am Title: Chapter 2
The things I like about this version is that Deb didn't force Brian to do something for Michael. And Emmett didn't have to go through his see the light phase. I'm enjoying your changes emmensly.