Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 7:39 am Title: Chapter 7

So, Brian finally knew about Kip and what Justin had done. This was also something I was missing in the show. Would have been nice to see Brian’s reaction. And maybe it would have been important for Brian to see what someone, or better Justin is willing to do for him. There is no way one could say it better than “your” Justin: “We care about each other so much, we're arguing over it." – Beautiful!

"You might as well start keeping some of your shit here, anyway” – I love the way it develops between them!

Another thing I like so much more than in the show is your solution relating to Gus. If there is a legal way for all three of them to be a parent or a guardian, it would be the best solution for all of them. I didn’t liked that Brian had to give up his rights just to help Mel and Linds getting back together.

“He’s not my boyfriend, he’s my Justin” – Oh! I love their conversations and especially how you always manage to express Brian’s astonishment and awe about his own deep feelings for Justin but also about Justin’s feelings for him!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh. God. I was SO nervous when Kip showed up, but you handled that SO well. I love how protective Brian is here, YOU WILL NOT DO THIS AGAIN... yes, controlling, but hot. And he only wants his Sunshine safe :)

And LOVE how you had Brian talk to Jenn, I still can't believe she told him on what should have been one of the happiest days of his life, ahh!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 7

Amazing and very long chapter.

I love how you revisit some parts of the end of the season 1: the baths, the museum, Kip, ...

It's great that Justin explained that he didn't need/want to go on dates as they are usually defined. He just wants to be with Brian.