Date: Jun 30, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
They are so cute, so beautiful together. Hm, and I don’t know if there’s something wrong with me, but I wouldn’t mind watching either… Daph is one lucky girl! :-)
And again, so many known scenes which you turned into something better. And it’s amazing how Brian lets his walls down with Justin. Talking about his Dad, crying in front of him and let himself be comforted by Justin. A real heartbreaking scene. I must admit, I’m not a big fan of Michael, so I love to see that Brian opens up to Justin more and more.
You also turned the King of Babylon scene into something better. Interesting development and discussion at the end. So Brian is angry about himself, because it’s no more fun having anonymous fucks and also getting his dick sucked by someone else than Justin. I think it’s great :-) and I really like this demanding Justin and a Brian who is more able to admit his feelings than the Brian in the show! Can’t wait to read further!
Date: Mar 03, 2018 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Even if Brian can get moody, he is going quite well for a recovery addict. I was afraid he would snap about the "boyfriend" situation, but he is getting better quite every day.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2018 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
You've hit the high points and improved them in such a way as to keep with the basic theme. Now it seems that Brian's traded on addiction in for another.
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:20 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this story so much! Really good stuff.