Date: Jul 01, 2018 8:39 am Title: Chapter 9
It’s so great they’ve already came so far. While Brian is able to admit more of his feelings and Justin is more demanding, it’s also great to see that Brian’s already not totally against being monogamous most of the time (and I think the most important part for Justin is, that Brian doesn’t fuck others right in front of him) and I think therefore Justin’s not as insecure as in the show so I hope there is no need for an Ethan!
He asked him to go to New York with him! How amazing! I still can’t stand the end of the show and I can’t understand why there couldn’t be a conversation between same similar to yours! After being more or less together for five years, after everything they went through and knowing how much they love each other… I still can’t understand
Oh, I love this scene at the restaurant and your writing-style. You let them be so cute and beautiful and hot and awesome together!
Justin and Brian at the zoo – funny to imagine and also so sad he never was there as a child. “Ask Brian”…. :-)
Date: Mar 06, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
The end is hilarious!!!
The whole chapter is amazing with the rewrite of some key parts of the series, but with Brian being more and more relax, emotionally available, fun and playful, full of hope and projects for the future.
The angst part about the trip to the Bahamas, which shouldn't have been stressful. I hope nothing will happen there.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 4:09 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm really enjoying this story, especially the role reversal of Justin providing the support Brian needs! We all know Brian isn't easy to deal with and can be a bear under normal circumstances, this is a true test of their love for each other! Can't wait to see where you take the story, ha and if Molly actually does " ask Brian"
Candy
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2018 3:32 am Title: Chapter 9
I love stories about Brian's birthday, because I always thought the funeral idea was cruel. So far all the parts that you've changed have turned out for the better.