Date: Jul 02, 2018 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG, this scene at the zoo is sooo funny. Again, would have loved to see this played by our favorite boys!
Every time, you write “Brian's shoulders slumped”, it breaks my heart… But Justin’s there for him and it’s good to see that Brian opens up, telling Justin this wasn’t his real dream. And then, Brian’s there for Justin, takes care of him… "No one gets to hurt you. No one." – So beautiful!
"I'm queer, Mom, and Sunshine here is the guy I fuck on a regular basis." – Again, would have loved to see this scene. Why couldn’t you be the one who wrote the scripts?
There are so many adorable scenes in this chapter… like their talk about their first night together, Brian’s birthday at Debs, the moment between Brian, Jennifer and her “grandson” :-) or Jennifer asking them about the “Bad night's sleep?", the talk about the strip… awesome!
And finally, the prom. I love, that you let Brian come there without being asked by Justin. He just knows how much this means to Justin and it’s also something he wants – great!
And then, after having the best three minutes of their entire life, it happens… And I’ve to admit, I couldn’t stop reading the next chapter before writing this review…
Date: Mar 19, 2018 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Really love this story. Very well written version. I can't wait to read the result of the cliffhanger, hoping for a different spin than the show. Cant wait for the next update!!
Date: Mar 08, 2018 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter! So many great things are happening.
I'm wondering about that evil cliffhanger though; I hope it won't end like I fear it will.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2018 3:38 am Title: Chapter 10
Now the changes were really good. But I'm concerned about that last Justin.