Date: Mar 28, 2018 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is a GREAT story and I can't wait to read the next chapter XD
Date: Mar 26, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 11
I was so unbelievably happy when I saw you had posted a new chapter. And what a great chapter it was! Thank you!
Date: Mar 25, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Love this version!!!! Can't wait for more!!
Date: Mar 25, 2018 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
Amazing chapter!
Some dark moments, some funny, some daring, some "in your face". Jennifer and Brian teaming for Justin's sake/health; Jennifer forcing Brian to sleep and demanding that he could come with her at the hospital. Brian deeply worried, but asking Justin basic questions to see if he is conscious ("How big's my dick?", "In what position did we first fuck?"); the article with Emmett's feedback.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2018 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad he didn't go into a coma for this. This is more real than the show.
Date: Mar 19, 2018 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Really love this story. Very well written version. I can't wait to read the result of the cliffhanger, hoping for a different spin than the show. Cant wait for the next update!!
Date: Mar 12, 2018 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I am seriously hoping you don't stop this wonderful story at Season One. I would absolutely love to read your versions of Seasons Two to Five if they continued on as amazing as this story.
Date: Mar 08, 2018 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter! So many great things are happening.
I'm wondering about that evil cliffhanger though; I hope it won't end like I fear it will.
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2018 3:38 am Title: Chapter 10
Now the changes were really good. But I'm concerned about that last Justin.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
The end is hilarious!!!
The whole chapter is amazing with the rewrite of some key parts of the series, but with Brian being more and more relax, emotionally available, fun and playful, full of hope and projects for the future.
The angst part about the trip to the Bahamas, which shouldn't have been stressful. I hope nothing will happen there.
Date: Mar 06, 2018 4:09 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm really enjoying this story, especially the role reversal of Justin providing the support Brian needs! We all know Brian isn't easy to deal with and can be a bear under normal circumstances, this is a true test of their love for each other! Can't wait to see where you take the story, ha and if Molly actually does " ask Brian"
Candy
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2018 3:32 am Title: Chapter 9
I love stories about Brian's birthday, because I always thought the funeral idea was cruel. So far all the parts that you've changed have turned out for the better.
Date: Mar 03, 2018 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Even if Brian can get moody, he is going quite well for a recovery addict. I was afraid he would snap about the "boyfriend" situation, but he is getting better quite every day.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2018 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
You've hit the high points and improved them in such a way as to keep with the basic theme. Now it seems that Brian's traded on addiction in for another.
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:20 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this story so much! Really good stuff.
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2018 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh. God. I was SO nervous when Kip showed up, but you handled that SO well. I love how protective Brian is here, YOU WILL NOT DO THIS AGAIN... yes, controlling, but hot. And he only wants his Sunshine safe :)
And LOVE how you had Brian talk to Jenn, I still can't believe she told him on what should have been one of the happiest days of his life, ahh!
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2018 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
The way you wrote Mikey's party was HOW it was supposed to go... and oh my, that scene with the pants.... HOT!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2018 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yet another enjoyable chapter with changes that make things oh so much better. You rock
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2018 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Brian eating the kiddie cereal made my heart all squishy ahhh :) Justin is allowing him to do things he's NEVER done before and not making a big deal out of it.
Also, the way Justin reacted when Jack came to the loft and Justin threatened to crush his foot if he didn't move? PERFECTION. No one messes with his boy ;)
Date: Feb 27, 2018 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Amazing and very long chapter.
I love how you revisit some parts of the end of the season 1: the baths, the museum, Kip, ...
It's great that Justin explained that he didn't need/want to go on dates as they are usually defined. He just wants to be with Brian.
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2018 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww, I love that Deb saw Brian asleep and wrapped around his sunshine, relaxed and happy, and because he was asleep, his guard was down and she got to see the man that only Justin gets to see. Her saying that he hasn't let anyone get that close. even Michael must be hard for her, but also must make her happy to see one of her boys so happy.
Justin offering to be Brian's addiction, oh, bless him, I get why he said it, but I am glad it pissed Brian off, he doesn't want Justin to be that, Justin means MORE to him than that :)
Date: Feb 27, 2018 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m loving this fic! I hope Brian’s out of town business was in a rehab center. With any luck He’ll have accepted his addiction and forgive Justin... Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love the way you have re-written this and made it BETTER!!!
Date: Feb 26, 2018 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oops, not this liar! At least, maybe Brian will find out why the suit was dropped.
This is another amazing chapter, with fun, wit, hot sex and hard times.
I loved how Brian told about his addiction and the reactions.