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Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2018 8:26 am Title: Chapter 5

I hate Mikey, such a whiney weasel. Good for Brian for taking his key YEH

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 4:21 am Title: Chapter 5

This story gives us a next level asshole Michael.....so incredibly loathsome already. This AU may call for at least one punch his ass into next week right  hook from Brian to Mikey. I mean really...he engineeredd Lindsay's disappearing act and robbing Brian of his child for years! I'd stomp on his balls. 

Gus bonding with Brian is so sweet. I hope Brian finds out Gus is his but don't tell Justin right away. Love this story sooooo much. Quick updates please 🙏

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I bet Daphne will make the link between Brian and Gus; she already reacted to the way they look.

Brian finally got his key back from Michael and made things clear; we could only hope he will be heard.

It's  also great that Brian is welcomed in Justin's family.

Wonderful story so far!

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 6:52 am Title: Chapter 5

Yes Justin, follow the hints.
Mikey is such an ass. Thank God Brian kicked him out.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 6:04 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh so much to love about this chapter...

Emmett standing up to Deb and making her see what Michael was really doing.

The family dinner that Jennifer was so sweet to include Brian.

Daphne almost figuring out Gus is Brian's son.

Justin still wanting to help Brian find his child.

Brian finally shoving Mikey out and taking his key!

Looking forward to more!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 5:19 am Title: Chapter 5

Dinner at Jen's gave Brian a look into how families should be. Not the demand to show up when told to instead of being asked to.

Should have changed those locks a long time ago. Michael made Lindsay leave with Brian's child. Did that even sink in?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:50 am Title: Chapter 5

Between Deb and Michael I'm not sure which one is the craziest.  Glad to see that Brian and Justin are getting along with the help of Jen and Daphne.  Now if Michael could just find a life.  Bet he's the reason that Lindsay manages to skip just when Brian gets close to finding her.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 5

OMG, Michael is the most annoying creature.  Can't stand him and you wrote it so well that the readers could feel just how annoying he is.

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