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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2018 5:13 am Title: Chapter 18

Love how Justin handled Michael The Delusional. Just tell Michael the truth and let him believe he's getting what he wants. LOL! Well, Michael is in for a big surprise!

Wow the Petersons are really something. Not what they think they are, but really something disgusting. Poor Nancy was so certain that Craig would be on their side. Shocker, he's not!

Nice to see that Craig is finally seeing what his hatred has done to their lives and that he's willing to work on his problems as well as help to protect Gus from Lindsay and her family.

Wonderful chapter!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2018 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 18

Huh...gotta say the whole Craig thing threw me for a loop. I was NOT expecting that at all! That was a great twist! Loved how he took down Lindsey and her parents. I got the impression at the very start of that part, that Lindsey was going to try flirting with Craig. I guess Nancy and Ron underestimated him. Hmmmmmmmmmw what's to happen now I wonder? 

And then there's Michael. Oh boy. Is he delusional or just in a constant state of denila? Has he been saying the same shit for so long now that he says it by wrote and has convinced himself it's the truth? Will Justin tell Brian what was said or will Michael somehow repeat it to Brian hiself? What happens when he relizes that Brian is leaving or has already left. Now that meltdown is gonna be worth waiting for !! lol

Terrific chapter!

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2018 12:31 am Title: Chapter 18

Michael has it all wrong.  Does Brian find out what he said?  I'm liking Craig, this is a good look for him.  Brian and Justin belong together along with Gus.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2018 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 18

Brian and Justin declaring their love for each other is so...Ridiculously Romantic!!!

Craig s willing to start over and get to know Justin is good, he doesn't need to understand the lifestyle he just needs to show Justin this time around that love is more important than someone's sexuality, cause he won't get another chance at forgiveness.

Michael needs to put down the crack pipe and talk to a therapist cause his delusions are taking over his life.

Though it will be funny the next time he comes to the loft and finds out Brian has moved out, I hope it is during a viewing so others can see his behavior and have him arrested.

Nancy needs to wake up and see that not everyone knows down to a bank account, Craig was smart to walk away and leave The Petersons to face their own immortality, if Randolph is planning to divorce Lindsay and hopefully be truthful first to his kids, then the press about this sham marriage, then The Petersons are stuck out on that limb by their Damn selves without a safety net anywhere.

They can try to threaten Brian or Justin but with Lindsay's activities and the fact that she lied, stole, abandoned her child for four years, while engaging in prostitution with men and probably women with means who wouldn't be ashamed to talk about it in public, they have no ammo.

While Brian and Justin are more than prepared to be brutally honest in their assessment of Lindsay and her antics.

Brian was a stud who never charged for his services cause he didn't need too, while Lindsay has to spread her legs and open her mouth for anyone to notice her existence.

I'm sorry Lynnette can't get pregnant but I am so Happy Gus ended up with Justin and Brian, no child should have to suffer Nana Nancy and Grandfather Weakling, Auntie/Mommy Whore and Mini-Nancy.

Blood is enough punishment <shivers>

Good Chapter:)

 

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2018 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 18

Hi Star, just wanted to say I'm still enjoying all your stories, including the ones I've re-read many times!!

This is definitely my current fave closely followed by You Belong To Me.

I hope you are ok & wanted to just give you encouragement to keep on writing the good stuff!

Take care

Deb

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2018 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Terrific chapter.  Glad to see that Craig didn't side with the Petersons.  Good job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 18

The scene in the shower was hot hot hot!

Craig is very surprising, in a wonderful way; of course it's because his new girlfriend asked a question he couldn't avoid.

The Peterson are not yet out of the woods since Craig didn't follow them. What will be their next move?

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