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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

OMG! Can Gus get any cuter?! He is so adorable with Craig who has finally seen the light and again with Deb who is willing to share his daddy with him.

Emmett is a true friend, helping with the loft and getting Brian, Justin and Gus on their way home.

Loving this!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2018 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  But oh that Lindsay is just evil and Michael stupid.  At least we have a nice Craig for a change.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2018 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 19

I'm glad that Justin finally told Brian about Mikey's visit.  Craig is turning into an all right grandpa.  Love how Emmett and Reese are getting along and how both them and Deb are siding with Brian over Michael.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2018 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19

Craig seems actually sincere and he doesn't talk badly about Brian; I hope it will last. Gus being his grandson and Brian's son, maybe it will help smooth things a little more.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 19

Never in a million years would I EVER have thought to write that a scene with Craig Taylor was sweet! Gus is such a special little boy and I'm so Happy that Justin is taking Craig's desire to know him- to know THEM- as a family to heart. I would like to think that it's solely Cara's influence, but I'm beginning to think that it may just be Craig's own growth and maturity. The playful banter between him and Justin about 'distractions' had me chuckling wildly as I envisioned we all have that reaction to our parents sex lives and vice versa. 

As for the lunch...Girl, you had me choked up with that one. The contrast between Michael and Brian is so evident there in that Brian truly has been the son that Debbie could only hope Michael would have been. I'm glad that Justin finally got around to telling Brian- and ultimately the rest of them- what Michael said. I agree with Em regarding Lindsay's involvement of the Dumber-mint Twins. Lindsay certainly would be eager enough to keep Michael close to sow dischord between Brian and Justin since she can't do it herself. And a large part of their M.O. would be to play on the insecurities of the newcomer. Too bad, so sad for them that Justin is not a lesser human being, but an equal to Brian in every way. 

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take us on this journey! Great Work, Darling!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2018 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 19

Brian and Justin are doing the right thing by moving away to begin their new life together.

Lindsay is playing checkers while Brian and Justin are playing chess, she is such an amateur with no skills besides what she does on her back or knees, and even then she could use more practice <smirk>

Deb seriously needs to let Michael to walk by himself without her always there to catch him, he wasted money and collectibles and practically ran his store into the ground, Hell he doesn't even care about the store now cause he is too busy chasing after Brian, who is running as fast as he can away from Michael and Lindsay.

Hope Deb is prepared for Michael's hysteria along with Lindsay's, they are going to be foaming at the mouth to find Brian.

Emmett should take Brian up on his offer it's time he follows his dreams in of making others come true.

Craig and Justin are making some progress they were even able to tease each other, perhaps friendship is a good start to more?

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