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Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 6

Really good. I can't wait for Mikey to figure out its not all about him.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Michael certainly is delusional! I sure hope Deb gets her head straight soon and realizes that Michael is always lying to her.

Brian and Gus playing together is so sweet! I wondered if he might make the connection to himself once he heard the full name Lindsay used and it looks like he is making that connection. Wonder what Justin will do when he finds out!

Looking forward to more!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved this chapter. So much fun for the boys, head slap for stupid Michael and Brian is so close to find out that Gus is his son. They're a family :D

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ooh Brian knows. Deep down he knows. Whatever happens, it's going to be painful for both of them.

Michael king of denial. Geeze.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ooooohhh....Brian is getting closer and closer to the truth. Hope Justin doesn't panic and run away with Gus. 

Michael must live in LaLa Land if he thinks the Loft is a place he can come and go as he pleases. He treats Brian, Em and Ted like toys not friends. Can't wait for Brian to smash he fantasy world to ashes. 

Next time Brian sees Mikey he needs to get some answer about how Mikey run Lindsay away. That comment from Brian about Lindsay fantasy about them being a couple was also shared my Mikey went right over dumbass' head. (I almost missed it too 😹) The one is heating up....love it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Emmett almost got a clue and Brian definitively have one about Gus. He now knows how to start his research about Lindsey.

Talking about clue: Michael is so far from the truth and he could wait a long time before Justin comes to his store to sign comics.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

The truth is getting close to being found out.  I'm so excited.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 4:21 am Title: Chapter 5

This story gives us a next level asshole Michael.....so incredibly loathsome already. This AU may call for at least one punch his ass into next week right  hook from Brian to Mikey. I mean really...he engineeredd Lindsay's disappearing act and robbing Brian of his child for years! I'd stomp on his balls. 

Gus bonding with Brian is so sweet. I hope Brian finds out Gus is his but don't tell Justin right away. Love this story sooooo much. Quick updates please 🙏

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I bet Daphne will make the link between Brian and Gus; she already reacted to the way they look.

Brian finally got his key back from Michael and made things clear; we could only hope he will be heard.

It's  also great that Brian is welcomed in Justin's family.

Wonderful story so far!

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 6:52 am Title: Chapter 5

Yes Justin, follow the hints.
Mikey is such an ass. Thank God Brian kicked him out.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 6:04 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh so much to love about this chapter...

Emmett standing up to Deb and making her see what Michael was really doing.

The family dinner that Jennifer was so sweet to include Brian.

Daphne almost figuring out Gus is Brian's son.

Justin still wanting to help Brian find his child.

Brian finally shoving Mikey out and taking his key!

Looking forward to more!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 5:19 am Title: Chapter 5

Dinner at Jen's gave Brian a look into how families should be. Not the demand to show up when told to instead of being asked to.

Should have changed those locks a long time ago. Michael made Lindsay leave with Brian's child. Did that even sink in?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:50 am Title: Chapter 5

Between Deb and Michael I'm not sure which one is the craziest.  Glad to see that Brian and Justin are getting along with the help of Jen and Daphne.  Now if Michael could just find a life.  Bet he's the reason that Lindsay manages to skip just when Brian gets close to finding her.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2018 4:42 am Title: Chapter 5

OMG, Michael is the most annoying creature.  Can't stand him and you wrote it so well that the readers could feel just how annoying he is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

Small world: knowing Jennifer will help Brian showing Justin that she's a good person.

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 7:43 am Title: Chapter 4

This story is getting better chapter by chapter. Thank you :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 2:36 am Title: Chapter 4

I am so enjoying this story and can't wait till the pieces fall into place.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 1:50 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh it is getting closer to the truth coming out.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 1:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm already addicted to this story. You are the Queen of writing vulnerable AU Brian storylines. 

Love that Justin lost his virginity to Brian. Hope Justin calls Brian soon so they can start building on their attraction. I'm so torn about Brian finding out about Gus. Part of me wants him too.....but the other worries for Justin....he knows the birth Father can seek and won custody. Fear could lead to Justin running away with Gus.  Sooooo much future angst coming as this story develops. Hope my B&J always and forever heart can take all as I wait for them to reach their happy ever after. 😁

Besides her old as time method of supporting herself Lindsay may have another means of supplementing her funds....... Could Michael actually be using money he gets from Brian to help Lindsay? I also bet he's the one telling her when Brian is closing in on her location. 

Can't wait for you to update. Loving it.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 1:09 am Title: Chapter 4

This is getting really good. Mikey of course needs a beat down , like always.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2018 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4

Oohhh! You made me cry with this chapter! Brian and Justin's conversation was so spot on and so moving.

I really love how Emmett, Ted and Blake support Brian.

Looking forward to Jen meeting Gus and Brian telling Deb what Mikey was doing. Hopefully Deb will listen!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

I never know what to write, but I love this already. So unique and, as always, well written. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 4:49 am Title: Chapter 3

Michael didn't fool his friends and lost his comics, while Justin is starting to get new ones. And what a way to start!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 4:45 am Title: Chapter 3

Getting back at Mikey is all well and good but .trouble is still headed Brian's way. Michael will eventually see him with Justin.

I hope Brian is finally done letting Mikeymooch off him. There truly is no reason for it.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 3

This gets more and more interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you again for grabbing this bunny!

*Hugs*

Deb

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