Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2018 12:20 am Title: Victorious

I can't wait to see where this story goes  - I so wanted to see "Next" at the bottom of the page lol ☺

Author's Response:

 

nickknack,

We will post about every three days. 

More soon.

Enjoy.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2018 1:13 am Title: Victorious

Wonderful chapter, from Ted and Emmett's 'talk', to Brian surprising Ted and Blake that really says what he thinks of them. A house? God, why can't I have a friend like Brian right now?! LOL! He really is a gem and Ted/Blake honor him by appreciating that, unlike Michael...

And speaking of the IDIOT man... Could he be any more wrong in that moment?! I wanted someone to walk outside, pick up a fire hydrant Incredible Hulk- style, go back in and the smack the F*CK out of him!!!! How inconsiderate and idiotic and...AND!!!!! Not only was he invasive in going through Brian's office to find the bottle of Dewars, but his jealousy was front and center. I'm sure had Justin not shown up, Michael would have been his usual thoughtless, yet half-way angelic-in-front-of-his-blind Mama, self. So since nothing he could possibly say would get Brian to pay attention, let alone disturb him and Justin, he moved on to cause unhappiness for Ted and Blake, specifically because it would have been the most effective. After all, mistery loves company, and God forbid that Michael should suffer ALONE! Ben should throw is ass into a cellar Kathy Bates in Misery-style (yes sledgehammer included) and throw the damn key in the middle of the Ohio River. It's the only way everyone else would be able to restore sanity! 

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle

Author's Response:

 

Chelle,

Ted has come a long way due to Brian's influence. Brian appreciates Ted and just wants to show him how much he means to him. We could all use a friend like that sometimes.

The weasel just wants to be the center of attention and if he isn't he will show just how nasty he really is. Since he is barely a thought in the story we didn't want to get into what Ben had to say when they got home. But the weasel probably didn't enjoyed the lecture.

More soon. <3

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 9:46 pm Title: Victorious

Ted is channeling Brian. First with Em which he handled just right. Husband tops best friend always. Glad Em understood that and accepted it. Then storming over to Brian's in anger before even talking to Blake. All classic Kinney of old moves. Good for him. No more doormat.

Michael is a buffoon.

 

 

Author's Response:

 

Sherry,

Ted is finally growing up (or growing a pair) with Brian's help.

The weasel doesn't change.

~charming1 & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Victorious

How wonderful of Emmett to throw a part and Brian to give them a magnificient gift.  How like Michael to be a pain in the butt.

Author's Response:

 

Phyllis, 

Emmett wanted to show Ted that he was willing to support him out of love and respect. 

Brian is always very generous.

The weasel never changes. 

~charming1 & Lorie~

PS. The story advances in chapter three. It's mostly written and I forgot it was chapter 3 not chapter 2.  ~Lorie