Date: May 29, 2018 1:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Brian is just the teacher Justin needs because for either of them it isn't about getting off, it's about the slow simple pleasure of exploring something new with each that they have never shared before.
Perhaps Ben should try honestly before Deb gets involved??? lol
Date: Apr 26, 2018 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
I had tried to read this on my phone when the first chapter was posted... and I honestly had difficulty following, especially the point of view. But I started it last night on my computer and read the entire thing in one night! I like that maybe Ben isn't as awful as we were first led to believe. Looking forward to the next installment!
Date: Apr 25, 2018 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, does that make Ben a double agent? It appears that Brian gets through to Justin where no one else can.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay, new story! This is different than your usual style and very interesting. More psychological/philosphical and more 'in their heads'. Choices is a bit like that too, but this is more so.
Looking forward to the rest of the story. Great so far.
Ta
Deb
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good , Ben is not a total sleaze.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! I'm so glad that Ben isn't really a bad guy! Nice kiss scene too! TAG
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ben's a double agent (for lack of a better description). Oh yeah big hurt coming.
Justin's being used for his brain and is so innocent that he can't realize it. Ben's right. Need to keep Brian in the picture.
A kiss so hot it sends their hearts racing. Nice.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Glad to read that Ben isn't the bad guy here; only, Brian doesn't know that yet.
I love how you are building their relationship and how Brian is acting.
Date: Apr 25, 2018 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great writing. Glad that Ben is kind of a good guy. Love that Brian & Justin are getting closer. Terrific story.