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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 31

Whoa!!! That's a major development! Poor Justin, poor Jennifer and Caroline: their lives are ruined because of a heartless son, doubled by a heartless bitch! At least, two great news: George found his grand-son and the thumb drive is there for hunting Julian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 12:52 am Title: Chapter 31

Looks like Justin is not alone and Lindsay came to the rescue.  Great job.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 31

Yes They Finally Have The Thumb Drive, Now Julian, Carter and their Cohorts Can Pay!

George Jr. and Virginia never deserved George but George deserved to see his grandson grow in a loving home, they better run cause if George is right about Justin then they will Pay Dearly for this Deception!!!

Now Justin has to deal with finding out George may be his Grandfather and someday meeting his mother?

Yeah he needs a moment or a week to adjust to all these new revelation and finding out his father is a Vile, Self-absorbed, A-Hole along with his Grandmother.

Wow!!!

 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 31

Why to go Hunter! You recorded that very important conversation!

Emmett... Bless your heart. You got Junior there, thought of the Teddy Bear, and told that irritated Hill just why it was vitally important to share everything when dealing with something of this magnitude. Good thing Lindsay and Mel walked into the kitchen when they did.

Poor George. To hear what his money has been allowed to do all these years, and what his wife and son have done in the past, and probably still doing some horrendous things to this day, has to be so disheartening. The FBI shouldn't have any problem tracking down Jennifer and her Mother, that's if the mother is still alive. Neither of the George's said Jennifer's last name, but if George would just think about it, remembering it's "Taylor", that should also prove Justin is George's Grandson.

Well, Virginia and George, Jr just screwed their lives up, by screwing the wrong people.  I'm pretty sure the statute of limitations is eight years after the child turns eighteen, so nothing can be done legally against either of them for bedding a minor. I know Jennifer will never have to hurt for money ever again, but it would be fun to see something monetary happen to Virginia and Junior for doing this. Although I guess it will when George cuts their money off, and drags their name through the mud. But would that hurt Justin, and in return, Jennfer? If Junior thinks he can sue George for money, well, he better realize he will be laughed out of court.  Just how has Jennifer and her Mother survived all these years if Virginia made sure they couldn't get employment? And what has Virginia promised to have done to Jennifer if she talks to George?

Okay, that brings me to Justin. Brian better hurry out of the kitchen and find Justin. I can just imagine the million thoughts going through Justin's head, and the feelings he's having trying to deal with this revelation. A Family... A Mother, a Grandmother, and a Grandfather. Something I'm pretty sure he's resigned himself from knowing he would never have. (we won't include Virginia and Jr as family.)

Carter better really watch out, and then pray to a god that he doesn't believe in, when they find him. And Julian hasn't escaped anybody's wrath because now the FBI has the thumb drive!  Oh how delighted that makes me feel!

This story is such an incredibly, fantastic story. Thank you for this update. Looking forward to your next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh this is getting better and better.  Great writing.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 31

 I can't even begin to describe what I felt reading this chapter! OMG! First, the whole story about what Jr. did to Jennifer....MY GOOD GRAVY AND BISCUITS, I can't wait until George and the rest make, HAM out of Virginia and her minion!

Then the discovery, and George's reaction to seeing the bear...OMG! Please, oh writing Goddess, let Justin and George make their peace. They both have suffered so much because of the betrayal and all for the sake of a 'family name!'

As for the last....YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! They have the thumb drive. Time for Julian to FRY!

Awesome chapter, StarBaby!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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