Date: Apr 23, 2018 8:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Interesting & creepy new villain - Julian. I like. TAG
Date: Apr 23, 2018 8:02 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Wow! What a completely unique and original premise. I don’t think I’ve read anything like it in the fandom. I’m hooked. TAG
Date: Apr 23, 2018 6:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Brian seems to know him well. Justin should warn him about Julian not lie to him.
And here I thought Ben was a nice guy. Ha!
Em is going to be a big help to them. At least I hope Justin lets him. Would be good for him.
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2018 4:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Love how Brian cares and Emmett is willing to help. I have a feeling that if Julian does something stupid he'll regret it.
Date: Apr 23, 2018 3:44 am Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, Brian to the rescue and he even called Emmett for help.
Ben and Julian seem awful.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
It's so different yet so intriguing!
It's really an unusual plot and characterization, i was hooked afref a few sentences
I totally love your Emmet,
Date: Apr 22, 2018 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Julian wants Justin in all capacity and will be trouble for anyone that gets in his way
Watch out Brian. Be nice if Justin gives him a heads up.
Em! OMG I love him. A good friend to Brian. Michael needed to know. Michael wouldn't believe if it came from Brian himself.
Jealous boyfriend indeed. They each have a person who has lofty ideas of fulfilling that position.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
I so want to see where this goes. Funny how Justin can see Brian as others don't. I guess it takes someone outside your own sphere to see thevreal you.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Julian and Michael need to hook up, then perhaps they can drive each other crazy and leave Brian and Justin alone. Damn! Two 'Mikeys' is enough to drive an insane man back to good sense...SMH But now we have a Mikey and a Michael/Lindsay/Ethan stalker combo with unlimited funds. *rolls eyes* I think Justin should move, not telling anyone except Brian where he is and limit Julian's access to him to only email. It may be the only way he can have something untainted without the other man purposefully getting in the way.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 22, 2018 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very good update. So different from the usual Brian/Justin stories.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 6:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you Emmett for telling Michael what he should feel/see/hear, but is too dumb for that.
The gap is slowing shrinking between Brian and Justin: I hope that Julian won't become another Michael only with a lot of power.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 5:44 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Another wonderful beginning! I can feel their pain, their loneliness; beautifully written!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2018 3:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Almost a spy story. Loving Emmett, seems like he's the only one of Brian's friends that has any sense.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2018 1:34 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
You've written many a story, but this one is so different. I'll be waiting for more on this.
Date: Apr 22, 2018 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Jesus' crackers! I was hooked already from the end of the first sentence and am so looking forward to the next installment. Get Busy, StarBaby!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 22, 2018 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Wow, this is great. Such a different concept. Can't wait for more chapters.
Date: Apr 21, 2018 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
I think this is going to be an amazing story. I hope they can help each other find love.
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2018 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Alone in a crowd
Star,
I love this.
You have a wonderful way of seeing Brian from the inside.
Hopefully, together these two can heal each other.
~Lorie