Date: Oct 21, 2018 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 37
Great update. Getting closer to a happy ending. At least I hope so.
Date: Oct 21, 2018 11:05 am Title: Chapter 37
This Kevin Finn agent. I'm trying to get it right. “Because it called into question why you gave a excellent rating to an agent who you trusted with things above his pay grade. Something neither Caraway or I, as your subordinates, were the right people to go to with.” Are they speaking about the FBI agent that was leaking information to Julian? And about the leak to the IRS? And just why WAS Finn doling out trust to this agent that apparently Finn had no right to do so? And by Finn sharing his password with this agent, it calls into question his own allegiance. And yet he wasn't putting a halt to this guys access, when Finn should have keep him out, but only had to do so because Blake and Justin made it happen. I get why he's angry, because it's not making him look very good to his superiors. But to me, I'd think Finn's superiors should have him in their office, sitting in the hotseat, supplying them with a believable explanation. Just why IS Finn allowed to stay in his office and badger Blake and Justin when all they doing was pointing out the person responsible? Too many questions yet.
So happy they are starting to find some of the lost boys. There must be so very many. Like Hill said, There were kids who we were too late to save. But with George and Friends, it sounds like they won't be left without getting some much needed help. And to whom did Justin make himself a target? And how? Because of the information he gave to the IRS?
“I’m going to ask Brian to marry me one day… and figure out how to let my mother in my life.” You made me very happy with that statement.
Looking forward to more.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2018 10:31 am Title: Chapter 37
Wow. I love Molly and enjoyed Blake and Justin dressing down the head man. A bit like real life.
Date: Oct 20, 2018 7:55 am Title: Chapter 36
Go Mikey! The thing Justin needs to realize is that Jennifer hadn't led a very glamorous life, she was 16, and George, Jr was a good-looking boy who was playing a game with her. She was powerless to not fall under his spell. Even 16 year old girls that have everything, still want the attraction a guy will give her, and Jennifer who was a quiet girl, never really had that attention before. She didn't know the signs to watch for. I'm happy Justin is so welcoming of Molly, and he IS trying with Jennifer. That has to say something. Could Hunter live with Jennifer? Would that also help with not having to go back to his mother?
Wonders never cease with what Julian is capable of, and what he has done. I take it the FBI has arrested the inside guy from the FBI that was helping Julian? He certainly has a wide network of people doing his bidding. Happy they finally have Carter in custody, too. I have to wonder just how many more are still at large? I hope they don't run into any untouchables. Because the untouchables are probably the ones in power that could continue doing some of the same things they are doing now.
Love this story. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:35 am Title: Chapter 36
Justin has to let go of the pain so he can enjoy the present and celebrate the future.
Blaming Jennifer for once being blinded by Love won't change anything, time to embrace life now and let the others deal with their own mistakes and selfish actions.
Sounds Julian and Carter are in more trouble than they thought they could escape.
Sucks To Be Them!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 36
Mikey to the rescue. Who woulda thought.
Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:20 am Title: Chapter 36
Great chapter. This is such a good story. Love it.
Date: Oct 19, 2018 7:02 am Title: Chapter 35
Star... I think you should just automatically add 'Tissue Warning' to your fics. I don't think I ever get so choked up as I do, than with your stories. The whole Jennifer, Justin and Molly arc was so touching and moving. Jennifer's shaking... It was easy to visualize as I was reading. I'm really happy Molly went out to the garden instead of the bathroom, as Molly's appearance seemed to break the ice. And now Molly is having a tour of the house with the hot boyfriend that's in love with her brother, while she fans her warmed cheeks.
George, Jr's wife seemed nice. How long were they married, that they still didn't have children? How is she gonna get money out of Junior when she divorces him?
Julian's lawyer sounds like he is really reaching for a silver lining. I would hope the thumb drive shows Julian right smack dab in the middle of the whole thing. The lawyer saying Julian was helping the FBI, but that can be proven false so fast it isn't funny. Sure, Carter is a major piece of shit, but Julian's almost worse because Julian is the one who sets these boys up for sale, and capitalizes on the sale. Maybe if it wasn't for Julian in charge, it would be harder for Carter to get his hands on the boys. And poor Gary. Sang like a canary, but had already fallen into the pits of hell.
So where did Ben and Daphne go? I can't comeup with that one.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2018 12:07 am Title: Chapter 35
This will not be easy but sitting on a blanket in a garden is a nice start.
Jennifer and Justin have to Forgive and move on cause the ones who caused them pain are getting theirs right between the eyes.
Julian is expecting Freedom but he is going to get three hits and a cot...If He's Lucky?
Date: Oct 18, 2018 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 35
Fantastic chapter. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2018 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 35
And so they meet. Nicely done.
Date: Oct 18, 2018 11:06 am Title: Chapter 35
Wow so he meets Jennifer and Molly and they are going to stay in his life I think. Nice smack down of the lawyer and Virginia
Date: Oct 18, 2018 10:39 am Title: Chapter 35
I was sure Molly would try to find Justin before anything else. I bet she must be amazed by Brian, who wouldn't? Poor Jennifer; it must be awful for her to come back into this house.
Date: Oct 16, 2018 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 34
I just thought of something else. Could Virginia or George, Jr be involved with Julian in his business of selling kids? And lord help them if they are! It gives me shivers to think about what they were doing to those kids. I really hope we get a front row seat when they bring in all those bastards.
Date: Oct 16, 2018 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 34
WOW! Power chapter. You Go George! Poor Tristan. I wonder if he will have a job for much longer. By the time George and Friends all pull out from that firm, they might not even have a firm left! Geez... Somehow I don't feel sorry for any of them. But all the things they did at Viginia's bidding is so underhanded, that all of them deserve to never be able to practice law again. Shouldn't they have realized that it was GEORGE'S money paying them, and not Virginia's? I'm still not sure why they listened to her. Wasn't there at least one attorney that had George's best interest at heart? And the fact they had Jennifer escorted from her apartment, well, where was she able to go at the age of sixteen to even survive? It takes a lot of money to set up new housing arraignments. And, just what is "at stake" for Jennifer? How can Virginia hurt her now? Because George can prove the 'heirloom' wasn't stolen. I hope she doesn't have access to the safety deposit box at the bank, anymore.
Viginia. Don't even get me started on that entitled bitch! But with all of George's ultimatum's, he handled her beautifully. The fact that George is already closing her access to money, and having the locks on the house changed, all I can say is, Touché. Take that bitch. Now she will be the one scrambling to try and find a place to live with no money. Hopefully, they won't even let her back in the house to get her clothes, or better yet, they should have a garbage bag full of her clothes sitting on the curb outside, or they can just be sitting in the dirt outside. (I know, I'm cruel.) But a girl can dream, can't they? And her idle threat about the business and the board, is laughable. Hopefully, George has kept controlling interest of the company. That way, when he divorces her, she will no longer belong in the business, and the board won't be able to keep from her being voted out. She can try and get a law firm to fight for her son's inheritance, but there's two things wrong with that picture. One, it's George's money to bequeath, and two, Virginia doesn't have access to money to hire a lawyer, but even if she does, I'm not sure anyone would want to fight against George in a court of law. Especially after learning of Virginia sleeping with a sixteen year old. Nope, Virginia. George holds all the cards.
Did I read that right... Virginia knows exactly who Justin is? Has she kept tabs on him all these years?
Emmett should have started singing "So Long, Farewell" while she was leaving after the way she kept glaring at him, pretty much dismissing him. I loved how he was totally showing her he wasn't intimidated by her. Loved that little wave of his hand.
So many things came about in this chapter. I really enjoyed it. I thoroughly LOVED George in this chapter. Showing Virginia who's boss... What can I say? It was thrilling! And speaking of dismissing, I think that's what a judge would do to Virginia's case if it should ever go to court. Virginia, don't count your chickens before they are hatched.
Love, love, love this story! Looking forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 16, 2018 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 34
Amazing speeches from George!
Does Virginia know who Justin actually is?
Date: Oct 16, 2018 2:51 am Title: Chapter 34
Just finished the latest chapter and all I can say is WOW! and YES! George was in PERFECT FORM to take down Tristan and the Turd he married! Vicious Virginia forgot a very valuable rule: There is NONE so dangerous to a person's peace of mind as someone is with nothing left to lose! Her continued arrogance is going to cost her in every way imaginable and even those she hasn't thought of yet. GOOD FOR GEORGE!!
As for her parting comment to Justin, she really has no idea who Justin is. The same baby she meant to protect herself and that little bastard she birthed, is the same one who is about to topple her little house of cards. I would almost feel sorry for her, but...Nah, my feelings just aren't set up that way!
The only thing that would have made this chapter more complete, is Emmett sitting there filing his nails...LOL That Queen sure has claws as George Jr. already found out the hard way. I guess Virginia will learn that lesson as well if she continues to mess with George. Is it wrong for me to be hoping she will?! LOL
Can't wait for MORE, StarBaby!
Happy Writing and HUGS.
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2018 1:42 am Title: Chapter 34
I think George is going to be just fine cause at long last he is taking back control and he is not wallowing in pity anymore.
Virginia and Junior can try to fight but they will lose cause George isn't just opening the door he had the hinges removed and is ready to let everything out., but first they gotta get to Jennifer and Molly before Virginia does.
Virginia needs to realize that George isn't as weak as she use to think.
Wow Fantastic Chapter!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2018 1:42 am Title: Chapter 34
George is HOT when he's agree. Virginia won't win that's for sure.
Date: Oct 16, 2018 1:10 am Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter. Such a good storyline. So different from the usual.
Date: Oct 14, 2018 1:11 pm Title: Chapter 33
Everything seems going well, too well; I hope the other shoe won't drop.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 33
Mess with Justin and you get the horns and then some lol
The IRIS should be ashamed they should've caught on to what Julian was doing sooner.
Julian and Carter should be afraid cause they have some angry co-conspirators who would love to rip them apart, especially when they find out the money Julian was stealing they can't get back.
Weird that Jennifer and Molly were two blocks from Justin but it is good that Justin is interested in seeing Molly, now Jennifer will take time but he is getting there in his own way.
The lawyers who helped Virginia are going to regret their actions just like Virginia and Junior.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Oct 12, 2018 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 33
I'm happy Brian could give Justin's mind a rest for a while, which also allowed him a little sleep. It must be exhausting to be Justin, sometimes. It also sounds like Molly is really intelligent, too. How old is Molly? It's creepy to realize that Jennifer and Molly only lived two blocks from Justin's. I know Justin was pretty much anti-social, but if he passed either on the street before, I hope they showed Justin kindness in either a smile or a friendly word. That might give Justin some indication of the type of people they are. If Caroline was a 'Richard's, wouldn't that have been Jennifer's name when she was 16? If so, how did Justin end up as a Taylor? Or was that Caroline's maiden name? I have no doubt the Virginia told Jennifer the baby was going to a very good home and would want for nothing. Let's hope the fact that Jennifer had signed up on a site to find Justin that, that will hold a lot of bearing in Justin's belief in her.
George's lawyers better watch out. When George gets through with them, they will be lucky if they can ever find work again. Or was it just one lawyer that betrayed him? Did Virginia hold something over his head? Did she give him sexual favors? When George divorces Virginia will he have to give her any money? If Virginia has to rely totally on her family's money, George, Jr better look out. Mommy Dearest isn't going to look upon him very kindly for giving them up after all her carefully executed plans. She will drop him like a two-dollar whore. Could George's doctor still have George, Jr's DNA results still on file? Because he's hardly gonna get JR to give another sample, unless he pays Jr to do it.
Yeah, Justin made sure the IRS felt like idiots. Good thing too. Because they are probably already making plans to leave the country. Sounds like Carter and Julian have a lynch mob coming after them. Julian's going to know first-hand what it's like to use Justin.
I'm enjoying this mystery you have going here. It is so very good. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to your next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 33
Wow, I love how this plot is evolving. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:56 am Title: Chapter 33
We get to meet Jennifer? I can't wait to see what George tells Virginia and George Jr. Why does the IRS feel like idiots?