Date: Oct 19, 2018 2:54 am Title: Chapter 2 - Animal Reactions
always liked Ted and EM. Hate Gold and Lisnsey
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2018 3:02 am Title: Chapter 2 - Animal Reactions
I’m loving this Brandi! Keep up the great writing... Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Animal Reactions
Love how you define each character with their animal counterparts. I do worry about Michael and what he plans. Can't believe he thought Brian would just give him $100,000.
Date: Apr 30, 2018 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Animal Reactions
If Justin didn't let the slimy fiddler get to Brian, and nearly destroyed him i can't wait to see what happens with the weasle.
Mikey really thinks that Brian is going to dig him out of the shit he got himself in? Is it any wonder Brian, Ted, and Emmett laughed in his face? She hasn't really shown up yet, but I'm sure Deb is blaming Brian for Michael's fuck up even though he was across the country when it happened.
Date: Apr 30, 2018 9:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - Animal Reactions
Excellent and funny!
The parallel between the avenue's patrons and the animals is really great.
I especially loved these parts:
- ‘Weasel War Dance’
- The red headed harridan hippo at the diner defended the weasel but was reprimanded and reminded to beware that the little mocha lioness seen in the blond fox’s presence had a mighty roar and sharper claws.