Date: Jun 23, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Into You
Good chapter. Brandon is such a jerk !!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Indeed, Brandon is a grade A jerk.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Jun 23, 2018 8:29 pm Title: Into You
I forgot to comment on Emmett and Brian's exchange: delightful; "fruit cup" reminds me of "fruit loops", the nickname of Howard in The Big Bang Theory.
Author's Response:
I love the Big Bang Theory :D
Date: Jun 23, 2018 8:26 pm Title: Into You
Whoa! Impressive how Brandon is kicked out of his mom's house. He has no money, no job and no motivation to get one: the next weeks will be tough for him; not that I'm sorry after what he did, yet, it's pretty drastic. He can't help himself and draw the attention on Brian and on his father. He really has no good feelings about the others around him.
Author's Response:
Brandon had to learn the hard way that some actions have consequences. He's a grown ass man, he needs to act like one. Elaine showed him tough love. People like Brandon will always try to blame others or use their flaws as a distraction in order to get away with their crimes.
Thanks for reviewing!