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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2019 11:03 pm Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

This was just the stress reliever that the boys needed. I was surprised Brian didn't recognize the sounds coming frim the room before he rushed in. Rushed in with a fireplace poker no less. Ha!

Brian better not tease Little Fish about this. I'd be truly pissed.

Reviewer: Suse Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2019 2:14 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

I put your story on my Kindle and took it with me on my Christmas vacation. I have so thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it. I rarely upload a story until it is completed but couldn’t resist this one. I love your character development and a shared intense dislike of Michael has endeared your writings to me. Hope you are feeling better. Thank You for sharing your talent with us. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2019 1:44 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

Wow For Ted blowing (Not Literally!) Brian's preconceived notions out the window and showing behind that boring persona is a very strong individual who enjoys a little dominance and submission every now and then from his good friend and master Dale.

I did giggle when they went in search of Ted cause I knew how it would play out with Ted.

Now Brian and Justin needing some bonding time is not surprising they have been so busy with starting their business and New clients that they have really not had time for one another.

So they needed time in the mirror room to reconnect and strengthen their bonds so they can handle what is coming their way next and California should also help with their bonds too.

What is Justin forgetting?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 6:54 pm Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

Thank you for a wonderful New Year gift of this chapter.  Wow, you are on a roll with the writing now.  Fantastic.  Happy New Year, Nichelle.  May 2019 be a great year for you.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 9:51 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

HAPPY NEW YEAR Nichelle!


 That was hot!!!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 9:37 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

Happy new year Nichelle awesome chapter I think the boys needed a step off the roundabout of work and stress to reconnect. I look forward to seeing what happens in California 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 7:09 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

HAPPY NEW YEAR Nichelle!

Thank you for this steaming chapter! That was hot as hell!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 7:03 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

I really have to hand it to you, Nichelle. This is some of the best comedy I have ever read. I thought Star or Tag had that title, but you totally surpassed them. As soon as I read. Brian has the bright idea to go to Ted’s condo, I was thinking that might not be a good idea, but when they decided to go to Dale's, I was like, Oh Hell No! When they heard the gasps and moans, I thought, Stop. Go Back. Retreat. What I didn't expect was that they would think Ted was actually in trouble. I could see Brian holding the poker, raised like a bat ready to strike, tiptoeing through that door. Justin's dialogue of the scene that played out was so very funny. I laughed so hard I had tears running down my face and on top of that, got a coughing fit. But when Justin thought his innocence was completely destoyed, I thought,Brian, you're slipping. You apparently haven't taught the twink everything yet.

So then what happens, we move on to a very delicious, hot Brian and Justin love scene. Definitely way more sexy and satisfying than Ted. I certainly wasn't laughing anymore.

What would Mel think if they went with Justin's idea to line their bedroom with mirrors?!?!?

I can just about imagine Brian's looks and comments as he greets Ted the next time he sees him. Maybe he won't say anything, but I can almost see him looking at Ted with new respect in his eyes. So much for Dull Ted, who can't get laid.

Thank you for this AWESOME update. New Year's Greetings are returned to you.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 5:51 am Title: WHAT HAS BEEN SEEN, CANNOT BE UNSEEN... WHERE THE {BLEEP} ARE THE BLINDERS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?!

What a lovely New Year's Eve present.  I always enjoy each and every chapter.

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