[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2020 9:57 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
I know you are dealing with;RL, but I gotta tell you, you have some kind of imagination.
Date: Jan 31, 2019 9:57 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
First of all Nichelle, sorry it has taken me so long to finish reading this chapter. I had computer problems and had to reset everything on it. Then I cannot read such a long chapter all at once (tired old eyes) so I split it up over a couple days and finally finished it. Now as to this chapter, you know I find your writing amazing and love it so much, but this one with all the characters and detail is beyond description. You are such a fantastic writer and you give such life to your characters. It is easy to identify with the QAF characters since we know who the actors are, but bringing in new characters and having us welcome them in the same way is beyong amazing. The story just grabs a reader's attention and doesn't let go. So I applaud you and I thank you for all that you put into your stories. Truly, truly wonderful !!! Will wait patiently for any and all updates on all your stories. Returning HUGS !
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2019 3:52 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
Wow What A Chapter so much info that they can all use to save themselves from those who wish to destroy them.
Craig's tears are wasted cause he had many chances to change but he chose himself over his family and now his Pity Party is insulting and his regrets are Too Little Too Late, he chose to hate his son and now that hate will be his destruction.
Lindsay seeing the baby as a burden now really isn't that surprising she probably saw Gus the same way when Brian didn't demand they get married and raise him together, she really shouldn't have kids but I hope the baby is ok and is saved from her machinations, Lindsay can't stand that for all her smarts all her plans failed spectacularly because she isn't as clever as she thinks.
For years she used her opened legs to get her way and manipulate others only she ran into someone who had a taste of her talents and found them sorely lacking and that's why she wants to own and punish Brian, because he rejected her before she had the chance to reject him and that makes him the second man to see that Lindsay wasn't worthy of him, Brian and Charles proved that Lindsay wasn't as cultivated as she thought and that class is what you are born with not what you steal.
Harry is seeing that stepping away from a terrible situation is the best thing for him cause it will save his sanity and his ex partner is about to learn that paybacks sometimes comes in threes and they sting for years.
Thanks for The Update :)
Date: Jan 31, 2019 12:24 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
absolutely fabulous chapter can't wait for part 2!!!!
Date: Jan 30, 2019 11:07 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
I hope all those bastards get nailed to wall. Russo an be first.
Craig is going to get his. What a fucking bastard tp set his own son that way.
As for Michael, once his secret is found in Calif I hope they find him swinging from the closest rafter.
Date: Jan 30, 2019 10:31 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
FINALLY!!! I HAVE BEEN CHOMPING AT THE BIT ALL DAY TO GET BACK TO THIS!!!
It was interesting about Perkins and Dixon. When it was first revealed that Perkins was let go, I thought - wait a minute - then thought - oh yeah - that's the OTHER story. Then I thought if Perkins was let go, what about Dixon? So when Chase and Tara were talking to Sheila, it was interesting what Chase told her about him being a loose canon. They really screwed up their careers and lives being involved with Lindsay. Being forced to move in order to keep working, must be a hard truth for them. It never really clicked before just how much younger these kids were than Lindsay. But to realize they were still in high school and sleeping with her... she should also be charged with child molestation.
Okay, so we all know Lindsay is all about a means to an end, but seriously, punching yourself in the stomach to cause a miscarriage, WOW! I'm almost at a loss for words. I've had four children, and there is no way I can conceive someone being able to punch themselves hard enough to cause that much damage. But, it doesn't sound like she will get her insanity plea, just like Michael didn't get his.
Craig is finally starting to realize he should have kept his dick in his pants, and accepted his gay son. All, a little too late. And who's to say that Peter won't end up being gay, too? Did you ever read Vamphile's Keeping Series? Yeah, didn't happen in that one, either. But sorry, no tears being shed from me on his misfortune. And I loved reading Justin's words coming back to haunt Craig. He has many years to hear them over and over, again and again.
Howard Bellweather. Interesting you brought him in, too. Kip Thomas apparently still has an axe to grind where Justin's concerned. But interesting you saying Kip has never been the same. Has he kind of went off the deep end? And could this have been the plan Michael was talking about in Chapter 55? About Justin being proven a liar and the truth needs to come out in the open? if that's it, it's another case of, a little too late. Bellweather can't help him, anymore.
But other interesting info came from that meeting between Sheila, Rachel and lime-haired Bubble-hehe- (which I'm assuming he is a criminal informant, or is he FBI?) I don't remember that being stipulated. And boy-oh-boy, can't wait for Chris to get in with Bubba. Let The Good Times Roll. Ahh, Mikey - Privileges Revoked. No V-man marathon. But I do hope he's awarded a front row seat for the 20/20 interview.
Herkowitz is in for one hell of a shock when he gets back to his 'almost-empty' 4.8 million dollar office. He will rue the day he took on Hobbs, Sr and his clone. (is that Chris?) Who is Russo's lawyer? Or is that Herkowitz, too? Imagine his surprise when he looks at his checking account and it's missing 3.8 million!!! hehe!
You did so good putting all this together, Nichelle. I marvel at the story you have woven for us. Thank you for all this!!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 30, 2019 10:29 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
Omg I had to read this chapter twice ( not a hardship) because you had so much going on and I couldn’t understand some of the legal parts. I just loved how the Kinney Taylor machine just rolls along and Justin stands so tall with everything he does. Brian is in awe of him these days.
Date: Jan 30, 2019 10:29 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
Omg I had to read this chapter twice ( not a hardship) because you had so much going on and I couldn’t understand some of the legal parts. I just loved how the Kinney Taylor machine just rolls along and Justin stands so tall with everything he does. Brian is in awe of him these days.
Date: Jan 30, 2019 6:20 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
Whao!! That's a massive chapter! Thank you Nichelle!
I loved the dicknames: excellent, witty and hilarious.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2019 3:29 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
I adore each chapter and the updates on all the characters. Can't wait for part 2.
Date: Jan 30, 2019 2:56 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 4: GOTCHA! OH, AND DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE OLD ADAGE CONCERNING DESPERATION...
WOW, OH WOW, OH WOW!!!! JUST WHERE DO I START?! I will just have to try breaking it down. But first, I want to say that after 62 chapters and almost 258k words, to realize only a couple, possibly three weeks have passed, is amazing!
Darius amazed me with his insight and knowledge of what is happening and what has happened. Can't believe, (yes, I can actually) that Russo has been taking bribes that long. And the knowledge that the country club set shunned him and the attackers family, was music to my ears. Just think of all the heartache that coud have been saved over the many years if Casey's bullet would have been aimed at Russo istead of her attacker. Another judge coming in probably wouldn't have let Seville off. Thus, killing two birds with a well-deserved bullet. And then we learned Chris had been arrested. 🙃
Glenn had some insightful knowledge to impart regarding a couple slimeballs. I felt sorry for Jennifer when full realization finally sunk in at what Hobbs, SR had done to Christian. Although she's not aware of the specifics, just the knowledge alone is enough to make a person's stomach churn. Then finding out Craig has set Justin up to take the fall for his embezzling, yeah, not a good meeting for Jennifer.
Melanie's talk with Harry, had me feeling sorry all over for him again being related that debauched degenate, Lance. So very happy Mel has found a way out for him from that no-good Herkowitz, (yeah, I shivered at the image of his dick stuck in a light socket, too) but I'm thinking he deserves it. Because if I'm following, his client, (I'm assuming you mean Hobbs) I'm thinking there's a past association between them. Either personal or professional, but it's there, and I don't think it's on the up and up.
I HAVE TO STOP HERE! I'VE HAD FIVE INTERRUPTIONS READING ALREADY AND JUST HAD COMPANY STOP IN. I WILL FINISH LATER. I HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN TO READ IT ALL YET!!! GRRRRRR.....
This is so very good, Nichelle. I can't imagine writing all this for one chapter!!!!
Cathy