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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 4:22 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Just realized I didn't finish my thoughts on the reveal of Saps basement. I was so anxious to ask about proof of the parties he held and what he tried to do to all the young boys, I forgot to mention that I bet he has a large vault in his basement filled with every kind of drug known to mankind. And many hundreds of pounds of it, too.

And if the syringes can be found and figure out what kind of drug was/is in them, I bet that can be traced back to Sap, too.

Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2019 3:36 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

These videos must have been the ones Troy was referring to way back with his first meeting with Ethan and Avery? And will any of this be albe to be traced back to Troy and in turn Eric? Because, regardless that their names are not being brought up at this moment in time, that is the first place we heard the term 'videos'.  I'm curious though, how Troy would know these existed.  And why would Sap 'give' these to Gardner? Because last I remember, Gardner did not have a pot to piss in, and I'm sure the videos were worth a fair penny. (Many fair pennies.)

Will we get full disclosure what will be found in the BASEMENT of Saps house?  *SHUDDER* (I'm thinking partially it will be the sex/playroom) with the swings and other sexual paraphernalia which was used during these 'parties'. Will there be "Proof' of what actually took place?

I know it's foolish to play childish games, but in retaliation for Bellweather's part in this, could his BB pictures become public knowledge? I'm sure there's always some rag willing to print an expose of that magnitude.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 1:56 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Hi Nichelle, still going great on this one, with writing up to your usual standard.

I Have a few confusing points, where this story differs from cannon.  Could you help me clear them up?

1. Where in the series timeline are we roughly in this chapter? You refer to gus as a toddler but if this is around series 4 surely he would be 3/4 now, so not a toddler.

2. Next, is somewhat of an assumption from this chapter; Unlike in cannon Brain didn't actually work with Stockwell in his campaign? 

3. Again, in this chapter it refers to Debbie getting a life of her own and Michael not being pleased about it.  Is this referring to the night at Sap's party for Justin, while Michael and the others ended up in jail for the night cos he was pissed with his mom dating Carl?  If so I'm confused, as in this story, Debbie doesn't meet Carl till she goes to see the police in chapter 57.

Thanks Nichelle, keep doing the good stuff,

Deb.



Author's Response:

Hey Deb,

So glad that you are still enjoying this very eclectic mix of Canon and AU. The response to this has been absolutely AMAZING and I remain so grateful that all of you continue to believe in my work. It's kind of convoluted, or as I'd like to think of it, Rewritten Literary Gumbo. So now to answer your questions:

Roughly this story is based from Ep:309 going forward, only I've also shortened the amount of time Justin spent with Ethan in the process. Somewhere in my mind, they were together about nine months, and to me, it shouldn't have taken as long as it did for him to figure out that he and Ethan were a mix made in hell. It was like watching what would have happened if Brian had given into Michael's wishes and became a couple. YUCK!!!!! That was SOOOOOOOO NOT a welcome image! So that said, I've moved up certain canon concepts to make them fit my vision of what could have happened during this time period if the writers had but time and inclination. For example, Brian and Justin's relationship as it was post-bombing has been reformatted and rewritten inside the post-Stockwell era, where they were just starting to really get their relationship on solid footing. The events that are happening regarding Claire, Michael, Lindsay, Craig and Lance are intermingled between Seasons 1-3, thereby giving the story its AU track. Which brings me to how the Sap storyline fits in...

In this work, Michael wouldn't have liked ANYTHING to take Deb's focus off of him and his goals. This is especially the idea given when it's mentioned that Debbie was beginning to develop a life of her own. True, that in JT2U, Debbie didn't officially meet Carl until much later, but she would have certainly been involved with other things. Remember that not only was she friends with Jennifer during that time, but that she was also the President of PFLAG, and possibly would have had social gatherings that did NOT include Michael. Her son definitely would not have been happy with that since in his mind, his mother's only reason for living was to serve him from the moment he was conceived. So that is why he would have gone to her house that night, as opposed to him stopping her from dating Carl.

Also in this story, Brian refused to work on the Stockwell campaign, and instead decided to dismantle it during his off hours. Gardner had the not-so-brilliant idea to gain the votes of the LGBT population by using Brian's openness regarding his sexuality. It backfired here because of a clause Mel had put into Brian's contract stating that, as a partner in Vangard, he could not be made to work with a client whose views were in direct opposition of his own. Gardner tried to override that clause, and enlisted the help of his lover (Lindsay) and Brian's 'best friend' to make that happen, figuring that between the three of them, Brian would bend to their wills especially if it threatened Justin in any capacity. Of course, it working on that particular campaign would have freed up Brian's time for Michael and Lindsay, and also kept him away from Justin. As for Craig's motive in obtaining the video, again it was to finally have something on hand to bend Justin to his will. All of them had motive and opportunity, except that none of them counted on getting caught and going to jail. So Gardner was the one holding that particular trump card, which has now backfired tremendously.

I hope this helped clear up the confusion!

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 4:02 pm Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Oh, Yeah! Justin. While reading it, Taylor Swift "Look, What You Made Me Do..." song just keep going on in my head.

LET KARMA Keep POKING Micheal & Lindsay's Jealous A**es With HER METAPHORICAL SHOVEL.

Love it! You ARE AWESOME !!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 11:14 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Whoa! You are on fire Nichelle! Thank you for this great update.

The dominoes are starting to shake and will fall in no time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2019 9:09 am Title: SETTING THE RECORD STRAIGHT Part 6: INTERVIEWS Segment 3: SO THIS IS WHAT YOU WANTED, HUH? WELL SADDLE UP AND LET'S RIDE!

Wow.  Good thing you had a plan for them to get around this.

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