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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2020 3:37 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Again, when they find the guy he hired to do the remodel on this house, I seriously hope he goes away for life... you can't get anymore aiding and abetting than this! And who knows, maybe the guy who did the remodel is more involved than just doing the remodeling...

Just how many Brian-lites have there been? Will anymore be uncovered? They should probably check his yard with ground penetrating radar just to be sure. (and maybe that's where the remodeler is!) But it will be interesting to know if he shot the rest of the body full of formaldehyde and is saving it behind the locked door, and is using it to perform acts of necrophilia.

And I'm curious if Michael had the guy get some plastic surgery so he was more of a dead ringer for Brian... because as they said, Brian has some pretty unique features. 

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2020 10:55 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Wow Michael you are a evil psychopath 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2020 7:28 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Oh Hell no you can't stop there!!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 11:51 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

There are no lengths Michael won't go to get what want a Murder wouldn't gaze him because to him everything has been for the greater good of himself, so who cares if people have to for so can Brian all to himself they weren't important anyway and were just obstacles to his happiness.

Makes me wonder what lengths was Lindsay willing to go once her fantasy life with Sam imploded on its self and Melanie wasn't stupid enough to take her back?

I was not expecting that answer to where is Brian-lite but now that we know where part of him what did Michael do with the rest?

What other secrets does that house hold?

I think after everything is settled and the criminals have been sent away everyone should go on vacation a d that house needs to be destroyed brick by brick.

Short Chapter, Long Chapter alwa

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:24 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

OMG.  I figured Brian lite was dead, but where he was found is mindboggling.  I love a mystery and the mystery is how Michael was able to get away with all this.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:10 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Wow, just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Amazing, just when I think the twists and turns are straightening out, you hit us with another BIG twist..  As always, my dear, FANTSTIC, WONDERFUL writing.  My love for this story is happy with any chapter, short or long.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 9:03 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Hi Nichelle,

You are so very welcome!

You already know that you are one of my favorite writers on KD: I was so enthralled and entertained by your witty and punchy comments that I started reading your stories.

Please don't doubt: many other readers and I are waiting for every single of your updates.

Take care!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:25 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

800 !!! Thank you Nichelle for this wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

 

OMG!!!! THANK YOU- ALL OF YOU SO MUCH!!! There are no words to describe how wonderful it is to know that you have enjoyed my work this much. Yeah, the tears of HAPPINESS are officially coming and will go unchecked for awhile yet.

A MAJOR SHOUT OUT TO CLAIRE for being the 800th review as well! Hard to believe that this story started all because I wasn't sure my gift of writing was still in tact after having taken so much time off due to a medical condition. And here we are- 91 chapters later- and still going strong!

I LOVE YOU ALL!

 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:25 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

799...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:24 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

798...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:23 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Too tempting... I'm gonna cheat again :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 8:17 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

This story is such a roller-coaster! Based on what we already have as clues, I bet Michael is no stranger to murder.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2020 6:31 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES CHAPTER 14: SLIP AND FALL

Ohhh my. So good! I love a great mystery. I always felt Michael was smarter than he looked. Looking forward to more. 🥰

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