Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2023 1:10 pm Title: .PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 15: THE 4 P’s OF INTENT: PHONY PUCCINI’S POSTHUMOUS PLOT

OMG! Now you have me wondering if Michael is really a serial killer and if he is going to try and say that the videos were all just bits of fantasy and that Lance must have killed everyone. This story is amazing! Can't wait for more.

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2023 4:22 pm Title: .PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 15: THE 4 P’s OF INTENT: PHONY PUCCINI’S POSTHUMOUS PLOT

Okay, lady. I've been pushing myself to get through this story... I just skimmed areas, and it helped me remember where we were. I would have had it done sooner, but we’ve had three days of severe thunder and lightning storms, and I didn’t want to chance my computer and internet. I swear, Dell laptops hate me!

Now that I’ve caught up, man I have questions… literally things I didn’t remember thinking about when you were really posting this heavily. So I’m attaching questions. If those things - or IF - they are coming, just let me know. Maybe it’s just something I missed.

Michael (the word makes me want to vomit.) … I’m really wondering how he amassed such a HUGE amount of money. So, he paid about a million for the California house and had about 100k in glass cases and collectibles, and money from Lance for stuff from the loft robbery. I know Debbie and he had money over the years from Brian (although it couldn’t be thousands of dollars.) Then there’s Justin’s Rage profits and Ben’s 80k life insurance. Did he get any money from Craig, Sap, or Spahn? And did he get any more money from Lance?

 He also has a massive amount of cash on hand and numerous drugs. (How did he get all that transferred from Pittsburgh?)

With this last chapter, we’ve learned about the four people who’ve been discovered in one of the rooms, so more should be coming on that. Although, I’m quite curious as to how he had Brian-lite continuing to come to the house many times. (The neighbor lady.) How or what could he say or do to keep getting the guy to keep coming back? And he must have had some major plastic surgery done to his face, to resemble Brian so closely. Because if Johns’ didn’t recognize the head... Ooh, unless Johns’ is not to be trusted. Oh, not another one.

And let’s not forget about the dungeon under the bed. I do hope we get to know what’s down there.

Questions, questions, questions. Just hoping I didn’t miss anything. Oh, and it was pure genius to have Hobbs’ brother/son, whatever, doing the remodeling.

Needless to say, this story that you’ve graced us with, should actually be turned into a novel for sale. This is far better than a lot of books I’ve read. And believe me when I say I’ve got HUNDREDS of them. You can’t collect them for fifty years, and not have lots.

So, signing on to KD for this last chapter, I was absolutely horrified to see only one review. That is so not good. Especially when all it takes is a few seconds to say ‘Thank You’ or ‘Enjoyed this.’

One last thought... I’m sure you’ve seen The Green Mile. Maybe Brandon could get a few of the trusted cops, get the cameras paused, (like Speed), and take Mikey outside for a private talk with Justin and Brian – oooh, or maybe Daphne. There wouldn’t be any witnesses, and maybe Mikey in his anger, kept pounding his head against the bars.

Aren’t I a comic? It’s strange while reading your stories, I get all these ideas as how to kill someone. ????

On to the next...

Mucho Hugs,

Cathy