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Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:19 am Title: REVELATIONS

Oh, I love them talking and working on their partnership.

 

Great job.  Let's get on with starting Kinnetik. I"m all in , too.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:23 pm Title: REVELATIONS

 

Chelle,

They are realizing that as hard as it may be in the beginning to voice all the things they feel harmed their relationship, it will make their bond stronger.

Loving this story.

~Lorie <3

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:18 pm Title: REVELATIONS

Amazing chapter! They talk and let their hidden facts in the open. Brian can have a partial view of what Michael did/said to Justin.

I'm surprised Justin didn't react to what Brian said about the memory of Justin at the hospital after the bashing; he could have asked why he didn't come to see him when he was recovering. It's something Justin should know.

It's great that Brian wants to start Kinnetik with Justin; it's so logical.



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it, Claire! I love writing Brian and Justin in this fic where they are getting thnigs out in the open BEFORE having to deal with everyone else. With the whole monogamy thing to the forefront of his mind, Justin probably didn't register what Brian said in reference to the hospital, although he knew that Brian was there during the early hours when he was first brought in. But he will get the whole scope of the matter at a later time, that's for sure. There are so many secret things that they need to reveal to each other so that people like Michael and Lindsay can't use any knowledge that they have to cause problems between them.

And YES, I LOVE the idea of them starting the business together. I always thought it should have happened this way in the show, so it's definitely my pleasure to write it this way in this one and SOWK.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 11:21 pm Title: REVELATIONS

This story is going great.  You are back to your great writing in my eyes.  Just do what is best for you.  We will wait for updates on this story and other WIPS.  Please take care of yourself and add me to those who care.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 10:24 pm Title: REVELATIONS

Clear the air, cleanse the soul.

They must be exhausted from all that conversation. It's new to/for them.

If I get one wish during this story is that Michael receives a smackdown from his bestest bud. Needs to be, say at a Sunday night dinner at Deb's. Also letting the family in on Michael's gem of a comment at the girl's anniversary party. I believe the word I'm looking for is annihilation. Then he can turn on Lindsay.

I'm a heartless bitch when it comes to that weasle. Sorry



Author's Response:

Hey Sherry! 

Well you know me...if no one else loves to smack Jesus into Michael, that would be ME! LOL!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:19 pm Title: REVELATIONS

God I wish they could have been this communicative on the show! This was spectacular  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Shine! I absolutely LOVE growing these characters beyond what the show produced. No doubt I love QAF, but sometimes they just made me so angry with the lack of inclination and time restraints (ie. the bashing storyline, Stockwell, and a few others). So it's so great to have this kind of platform to expand on the storylines, or right the wrongs I felt were committed on the show. It's also a wonderful way to invent new traumas. What can I say? I'm an Angst QUEEN! Well, at least on paper, that is.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 3:57 pm Title: REVELATIONS

Love the way you think.



Author's Response:

Why thank you Darling Phyllis!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:39 am Title: REVELATIONS

Love your writing and always happy to read it.  So sorry that you have been having some issues.  Hope that you are improving daily.  Will be thrilled when you get back in full swing with the WIPS.  My favorite that I am waiting for is "Before I Let Go" which must really be difficult writing with so many different stories happening at once.  Will wait patiently for updates and please, please feel better. Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers !!!!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 7:14 am Title: REVELATIONS

This is off to a great start! Love that they are talking to each other instead of holding everything in. Justin finally telling Brian what drove him to Ethan is a wonderful way to get them to where they should be, together. And Brian suggesting monogamy! Love it. Looking forward to more.

*Hugs*

Deb

PS: Still keeping you in my thoughts for a speedy recovery.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Deb! The good news is that I can sit up a little longer now, but trying to recondition myself to pull that wonderful and productive 12-15+ hours in my chair again is going to be a trial. I never realized how long I would be in front of the computer, with the exception of taking care of family stuff. It's quite unbelievable! 

I'm so happy that you are enjoying my take on two classics! Brian has asked for complete honesty from Justin, and he's certainly going to get it. I always thought that it was the things they didn't say that caused them to implode during the 'Scuzzbucket Era' so I'm enjoying them revealing it all and without prying eyes this time. Seems that this is the most perfect sequel to "Filled Silence" I could have ever thought up.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

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