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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 4:10 am Title: CONTRACTS

never liked Lindsey and never trusted Debbie

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2018 8:58 pm Title: CONTRACTS

I’m loving this so much- you’ve got me completely addicted already- I love that Brian and Justin are finally discussing things and Brian is beginning to understand how much Michael, Lindsay and Deb are able to manipulate him and pull his strings. :)

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:33 am Title: CONTRACTS

Well,  over the years I've turned very anti-Michael, so I'm willing to think the worst.

 

I guess you'll take me where you want me to go. 

I'm falling in love with them again.  So far, so very good.

 

Thanks

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:36 pm Title: CONTRACTS

 

Chelle,

They are realizing that they are stronger as a unit than either one could possibly be alone. 

Another great chapter. 

~Lorie <3

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:41 pm Title: CONTRACTS

Another wonderful chapter! Mel and Brian quite getting along! That's new and not so surprising. They act the same way.

She also prepared the documents to sue Gardner even before Brian was thinking about it.



Author's Response:

Hey Claire! 

I always thought that if left alone, Mel and Brian would have a friendship second to none. Her insecurity played a major role to keep that from happening on the series, but I love developing their relationship in fanfic. I also felt that she wasn't utilized as an attorney to her full potential so I love letting the pit bull loose!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:11 am Title: CONTRACTS

Gardner is going to wind up paying through the nose. I hope Brian can get him for slandering his reputation. Trying to blackball him and never expecting Brian to find out. Bastard!

Michael is going down. This will rip the family apart and it will be all Mikey's doing. Bet he'd try to have Brian tell Justin to leave him alone.

Without Lindsay around, Mel and Brian get along. Nice to know. So glad justin talked him into retaining his rights as Gus' father. Justin is so right about Lindsay.



Author's Response:

Hey Sherry! 

Gardner is going to need a new hobby by the time Mel and Brian gets through with him. And there are going to be a few surprises in that sect as well.

Justin is definitely going to be Brian's not-so-secret weapon. Now that he has his clarity back, he's beginning to see through to the true motives of people. If there was one thing he learned from growing up WASP and being around Deb and Michael is that no good deed comes without a price- or at least that's true in the case of some folks. Brian learned that long ago, but is definitely going to be reminded in the coming chapters.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 3:31 am Title: CONTRACTS

Love how you are going about righting some wrongs.  Can't wait to find out how bad things are and to watch you fix them.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 1:49 am Title: CONTRACTS

Wow, great chapter.  Let me tell you, your mojo is on fire with this story.  Just love your writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Darling! And also for the well wishes. They mean a great deal! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. I just posted Chapter 4 as well. ENJOY!

 

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