Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:39 am Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Oh to be a fly on the wall wherever Michael is right now.
Justin would have made the saltiest of sailors blush with that language. G-d better not help Michael when Justin comes facfe to face with him.
Yes I can see Michael having something to do with Brian's firing from Vanguard, but I don't think he let Debbie in on his secret plans for his daydreams. How could he let her work her ass off if she knew?
Eyeopeners keep popping up for Mel to see. I'm really glad she's on his side.
Did Em grab the books he found? Give them to Mel? I love how he's looking out for Brian. Thanking him for taking care of his Teddy.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 12:51 am Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
OMG! That really is some creative cussing! I'm going to have to try and memorize it so I can use it the next time I'm stuck in traffic. LOL!
Wow! This was such an eye-opener! Michael is going to be in a hell of a shit fire when he gets back. That is if he ever comes back. Brian should report his car stolen and Ben should report Hunter as kidnapped. LOL! OK, not really but it sure would chap Mikey's little flat ass!
I will also have to memorize Emmett's wonderful phone answering quips! Those are hysterical. You would think little Mikey would have caught on!
Looks like Ben is in for an eye-opening experience when he meets up with Mel and finds out just what Mikey has been up to.
And love how Emmett is taking care of Brian as well as Justin. And even Mel is in on that as well.
Dang! Can't wait for the next chapter! So looking forward to it!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 9:18 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Chelle,
I love that Emmett and Mel see the depth of Brian and Justin's feelings for each other and are willing to be there for them and help out where they can. I think that out of the whole family Emmett was to only one who always knew what those two meant to each other.
Looking forward to all of the weasel's scheming ways coming to light.
~Lorie <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 8:17 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
It's interesting to learn that the real Rage is...Justin. Can't wait to see how Ben takes all this. Can't imagine him being too happy. Mel and Emmett are firmly behind Brian and Justin and I imagine Ted will be too.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 7:53 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
GUUUURRRRLLLL I had to take a breath and wipe my eyes I was laughing so hard at the start of this chapter LOL. Michael better watch his back because the ceiling is about to collapse.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 7:29 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Woohoo Michael is going to loose so much! Is it bad I'm taking pleasure out of that? Lol So glad Em & Mel are getting a lesson in Brian & Justin 101.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:38 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
I forgot to comment on Justin's and Emmett's cursing: it was amazingly hilarious!
Justin's one is my favorite "I ought to knock his ass for a loop and duct tape him shut after shoving an extra large dildo up his ass, then put his lazy, shiftless, looking like he’s forever constipated, gorilla-grinning ass on a plane to China where they would cut off his hands".
How do you come up with that? Inspired!
Happy writing!!!
Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:21 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
I would have done the same thing as Justin: the rage and hate he must feel!
Luckily, he is not alone. Mel, Emmett and Brian are already fighting with him and Ben will follow. I guess Hunter will too once he will be back. Which will be very soon, now that Michael knows his secrets are becoming "public", he will be back to the Pitts, not caring anymore about Hunter's safety.
Emmett offering to help Brian is natural, but Brian accepting isn't: another sign of Justin's influence.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:08 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Wow, you are really into writing this story. I hope that means that you are feeling somewhat better. Great chapter. Can't wait for Michael to get the kick in the butt that he deserves.
Author's Response:
Hey Marilynn,
I am definitely enjoying writing this! It's an idea that I had been toying around with for a number of years and it just seemed like the right time to have at it. Not being able to sit long enough to write the last few weeks has shown me just how long I actually sit at my desk hammering out chapter after chapter, both within this realm and that of my RL. So this is serving its purpose in getting me back into the groove.
The good news is that I can sit up for longer periods now. Anytime you have surgery any portion of your abdomen, it makes it a bit difficult. I go for a follow-up on Monday, but I'm still trying to keep as much pressure off of my lower abdomen as much as possible. Still very tender and extremely sore in spots. I'm learning to obey my body (somewhat reluctantly), but going up and down stairs yesterday...yeah, still haven't quite learned enough yet...LOL I won't be able to do the usual 12-15 hour+ days for awhile yet, but for now, this is enough.
Thanks for reading, reviewing and your continued wqell wishes! They mean so much!
HUGS,
~Nichelle