Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:49 pm Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
So many revelations, but the last one is unexpected, yet, logical.
Ben is starting to see the light and I hope he will follow through and will look for the big RAID can!
Vic is going to get really angry with Deb if she covers for Michael. I love the way you wrote Brian/Vic's relationship. I would have loved to see more of them in the series.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 9:49 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Okay, I usually don't leave feedback as a rule, but I have to say this story has me so intrugued, and so itching for more.
Part of me wants to wait till it's all finished and then read the rest so that I can get it all at once, or to follow you around to make sure you do nothing but write this story till it's finished, lol
This is so fantastic, it's got me sitting on the edge of my seat just waiting for the next chapter, so here I will be be, hitting refresh till I see that title again, lol (guess I picked the second option).
bec
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you so much, Bec. This is such a stellar compliment to my work; a true testament that I'm on the right road with such a classic storyline, but being done my way. I will cherish it always.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:23 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Always thought he was behind the break-in. One more tick to add to his shit list.
Shame it takes something like this for people to see how Brian and Justin really are with each other.
Can just picture Deb's indignation when she hears all this. Whether by Vic, no he shouldn't be the one to tell her, or the police or in court. It's all going to come back as Brian's fault for leading her baby boy on.
Pior guy. He'll lose his surrogate mother. Probably better off. He'll have Jenn in his corner.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:20 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Michael, Michael, Michael.....can Brian please punch him in the face again?
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:34 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Love how you are connecting all the dots and it looks like burglary is yet another thing against Michael. Good to know that Vic and Ben are not going to cover for the big rat.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:24 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Loving this!!!!! Can't wait for more!! I always love a good Anti-Michael story, he he he ha ha ha!! Always love your stories. I can't wait to see how the payback will go with Michael and who's side Deb will fall on. Keep up the great work!!!
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:06 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Holy fucking shit is right!!! Wow....great cliff hanger ending to a fabulous chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:03 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Michael definitely wrote too many checkes his ass can't cash.
Throw the book at him Danno! LOL
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:02 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Holy crap! Well, Ben's eyes are now wide open! And Mel's have been opened even further. So glad that Ben told her about Michael's part in the Ethan debacle. Ohhhh... now you have me wondering if Michael and Lindsay plotted together to get Ethan and Justin together!
Poor Vic! So glad that Vic isn't living with Deb anymore; that would have been a hell no one deserves with what is going on with Michael. It's good to see that Vic's eyes have always been open where Deb and Michael are concerned. Maybe he'll be able to talk some sense into her before Michael gets his puppy dog eyes latched on to her. She should probably have her finances checked, too! Wouldn't put it past Michael to steal from her as well.
Damn, I'm not sure how I'll be able to wait for the next update! Maybe I'll just re-read the first six until the next one! Hehehe.
Loving it!!!!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 08, 2018 1:53 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
OMG, Nichelle, this story is beyond amazing & wonderful. You definitely are back in the writing mode. So happy since I hope that means you are feeling better. If a good review helps, make this one beyond fantastic !!!!