Date: Jun 09, 2018 7:19 am Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
I love the inner thought you give to your characters. It feels the blanks any film or series leaves. It explains how Jutsin would feel about Hunter and vice versa.
It's amazing to have so frequent updates: happy writing!
Date: Jun 09, 2018 2:46 am Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
Smart move, Hunter! Can't wait to find out what he's going to tell them. I hope he gives Ben a chance. I can understand Ben's reluctance to trust himself around his loved ones after his behavior during his roid rage, but he's got to realize that he's not on steriods and he would never intentionally hurt Hunter physically or emotionally. He's so angry right now that he's not seeing how his actions are giving the wrong signs to his son. Glad he listened to Justin and went to talk to Hunter.
I'm wondering if it will seem like World War III is about to break out once Jennifer learns of Michael's actions where Justin and Brian are concerned. Hopefully she'll get through to Debbie.
Off to read the next chapter! Yay!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 09, 2018 1:39 am Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
Bravo! I am anxiously awaiting MORE.
Date: Jun 09, 2018 12:30 am Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
Okay, you are totally in the zone with this story, not one boring chapter in the entire 7 chapters so far. I kept glancing at the side bar telling myself "there's not enough room to tell Hunter's story, there's not enough room, we're gonna have to wait till the next chapter...noooooooo...
I'm glad Justin metaphorically slapped Ben upside the head, he needed it, Hunter needed his 'dad' to hug him at that moment in time. And yes, call in the 'good, smart raising them to be independant mom' to talk to 'selfish, dumb spoil him rotten mom' can't wait for the next chapter.
This is brilliant!!
bec
Date: Jun 08, 2018 10:39 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
"You're analogies & metaphors are both accurate & disturbing" LMAO Omg I love that & I'm going to use it sometime. Lol do glad Hunter left shit for brains behind. He belongs with Ben & Ben alone.
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 10:13 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
I do so look forward to your new chapters. They make my day. Glad to see that Hunter made it back to Pitts and has found a new friend though I don't think he'll need him.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 9:51 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
What does Hunter want them to hear?
Ben will straighten out things witj his son. Michael won't win.
Maybe Jenn should bring Deb to the loft to hear things first hand. To read the written proof that her son is a fucking jackal.