Date: Jun 11, 2018 7:32 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
What an amazing chapter: so many hot topics finally in the open. It was long due and they exchanged so much.
I also love how you are filling the blanks that were in the series.
Great job! Happy writing!
Date: Jun 10, 2018 3:56 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Wow! Questions that definitely needed answering...good for them! Feeling the love...all over the place! Obviously, that wasn't Jennifer at Deb's door. Hmmmm who was it?
Date: Jun 10, 2018 12:05 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
A conversation so long over due.
A check will so welcomed and humbling.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 5:59 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
It might sound a bit strange, but this chapter was absolutely lovely. The way the talked and listened to each other was so intune with who they are growing to be. Love it!
And now Jennifer will get to brighten their day a bit!
But again... Who the hell was at Deb's door!? LOL! Next chapter maybe?
Love it all!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:48 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Great chapter!! I love they are talking about everything. I am so ready to see Michael get what is really coming to him (and not in a positive life affirming way). Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:15 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
You pack a lot into a chapter. That's a positive comment. It's nice to get a real sense of what's happening, not just a little snippet.
How enjoyable to read about them actually talking and communicating with each other. I liked that they don't want to be blindsided any longer by other people. And if they talk and are honest with each other it lessens' those chances. Thanks for taking us there.
Now, off to bed I go.
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:12 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Deb, Michael and Lindsay are such manipulative people they used Brian's insecurities to bend him to their will for years and now they will pay the consequences for those actions.
Brian and Justin sitting on the floor talking about everything is good it takes away the power others will use to try to separate them.
I especially like Brian saying I Love You and just saying Justin saying it back while also agreeing that they shouldn't over use it cause it does take away it's meaning.
Deb, Michael and Lindsay used I Love You to browbeat Brian and so it totally takes on a different meaning when they use it.
Now they know to talk to each other first before they take anything as truth from certain members of The Family.
Jennifer is coming when they need a break to deliver some good news that they need after all the Crap they just found out.
Michael and Lindsay used Ethan to separate Brian and Justin?
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 4:11 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Love how all the truth is in the open. I'm sure there are other things that need explaining but this will do for now.