Date: Jun 13, 2018 9:23 am Title: PAPERWORK
I love this story. Thanks for updating.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:20 am Title: PAPERWORK
Mel is so lucky that Lindsay isn't speaking to her! Hahaha! Unfortunately Deb is talking to her or maybe that should be at her. Deb just expects everyone to drop whatever is going on in their lives and rush to help her and Michael. Love that Deb had to be escorted out by security! And so happy that Mel told her off, especially after the comments Deb made about Hunter.
“Because I’ll sue the thong off him if he doesn’t. Now leave!” - I needed brain bleach after that image! Ewwww!
*Gasp* Lindsay bought dresses in a size 6? Wishful thinking isn't it? And she thought she would get away with it by putting them in Gus' closet? Wow! She is not very clever. Loved Mel's comment about him being too young to dress in drag. LOL! But Lindsay was smart enough to leave without an escort from security.
Mel had all sorts of good news. And Ted's back and all the right friend's are happy that he is; Cynthia is extremely excited about Brian and Justin's LDP; Jennifer is a kick-ass realtor getting locations for Kinnetik and Mel and Janean's office; and this is all making me very happy.
Love how they are all looking out for each other.
Another wonderful chapter, Nichelle!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 13, 2018 4:22 am Title: PAPERWORK
After being away for a long weekend I get back to more Novotny drama and welcome back Hunter, he's finally away from the Madness!!!
I knew Debbie was up to no good, it's got to hurt like hell to Brian what she did but he's got to rip the band-aid off in one swoop. Her and her parasite have to pay.
Still on the edge of my seat, can't wait for more, no pressure, just you know, a couple of thousand words if you can, lol Thanks for sharing all these wonderful words with us.
bec
Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:25 am Title: PAPERWORK
Michael and Deb, it's all going to come crashing in on the and crush them. No pity.
Does Mel know that Brian's new business is in the old bath house? Can't wait for her reaction.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 11:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Awwwwww Brian called Ted....Teddy! So sweet! This whole chapter was fabulous! They always are but this one was especially so. It just flowed perfectly.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Yes, Welcome back Teddy!!! It really must be a shock for Ted to see Brian as he is now. Not totally different, yet so changed.
Mel starting her own practice could only mean more autonomy and workload as well: I hope she will be able to keep up with Lindsay so she could prevent any problem with Gus.
Author's Response:
WOW! 100th review! AMAZING! Thank you so much!
Ted's who journey during the series struck deep chords with me. It gives me such joy to be able to write him this way! I'm also going to have a good time developing Ted and Brian's relationship growing and changing in ways neither of them anticipated.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 5:30 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Looks Ted is back and he sharpening his knives for the slaughter, thank goodness he kept such detailed records because Michael and Deb will try everything they can to get Brian to stop, but when Brian needed that money none of them cared to give him a dime.
Might also want to check what money Brian gave to Deb that she promised to payback but never did?
Melanie standing up for herself and not taking anymore of Lindsay's Crap is good, she is right that if Lindsay ain't getting o loving at home then she is spreading her legs for someone else, Ted should also look into the support payments for Gus, Lindsay is only working part time at the gallery and that doesn't pay much, plus she spends money like it will never run out??
Deb is really showing her true colors now.
Ted is about to become the man he should've been years ago and he has his True Friends to help him.
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:59 pm Title: PAPERWORK
You do give good chapter. This fic is so unique, I’m on the edge of my seat reading it.
Plus I always love a good anti Mikey story.
Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
Fantastic chapter. Your mojo is working overtime. This story would have made amazing episodes for the series. Great job. Hope you are feeling better.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2018 4:51 pm Title: PAPERWORK
It's so good to see Teddy back and to have him working for not only Brian and Justin, but Melanie as well. Lindsay is going to be in for a big surprise.