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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 6:40 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

I hope you feel better now, sorry aboutyour sickness.  Wishing you the best of health

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2018 4:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Ohhhh! I love Dale Wexler! He could be very good for Ted whether as a friend or more.

How strange! Lindsay doesn't seem to like being the center of attention. Wonder why? Hmmmm...

Love how Brian and Justin are communicating with more than sex (even if they did nearly wear each other out LOL!) and are talking more about how everything is affecting them.

Yay! Mel hung up on Lindsay! LOL!

Oh, it's another cliffhanger! Wonder what he found out.

Off to read more.

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2018 2:03 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Omg Lindsay as well by the sound of it. I am loving all this anti Michael/Lindsay/Debbie and they are evil buggers. I look forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:43 pm Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

I was pretty sure I had already left a review on this.  It is an amazing chapter where Ted stands out and Dale comes up with even more evidence against M&L.  I couldn't believe that Lindsay thought that she could just waltz in and everything with Mel would be okay.  Looking forward to finding out what Dale found out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 4:50 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Did Dale find out that Lindsey is involved in Michael's machinations? If not, who is SHE?

Evil cliffhanger!

I hope you are doing better every day. Happy writing!

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:24 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Great chapter!! Great cliff hanger can't wait for the next chapter. Well wishes and prayers sent your way hope you feel better!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:23 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Lindsay should've realized remembered that as the mistress her only power is being on her back and knees, and that a scorned wife will use everything in her arsenal to make her husband and the other woman pay.

Plus he adultery being splashed all over the tabloids will help Mel get her marriage cancelled, save Sydney from the harsh fallout by terminating her Ass, plus with everything Mrs. Amanda Auerbach has on them both Sam will be too busy saving his fortune by calling Lindsay the temptress who tried to ruin his marriage in the press. (I hope Amanda takes it all!!!)

Plus Lindsay will be scrambling to save any money she stole from Gus, by crying to Mommy and Daddy who might just want to extend their stay in Europe when they find out about this, besides Lynnette's husband won't enjoy the press camped out on his lawn, Lynnette might enjoy anonymously giving the press some tidbits about her sister.

Brian and Justin might end up in the sooner than think;)

So how much did Deb bully out of Brian and did she also get some of the Rage money too?

How deeply is Lindsay involved?

If Dale found even more evidence than Michael, Deb and the other conspirators have a lot of trouble heading there way.

Thanks for the Update, you take care of yourself We'll wait patiently and be more happier for it cause you're on the mend :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 1:19 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Well Ted's going to have an interesting dinner to say the least. Can't wait for Dale to drop the bombshell he found out.

I knew Lindsay was behind what Deb and Michael were doing. Screwed herself royally. And now to be named in the lawsuit filed by Sam's wife. Can't get much better than that. Even her parents want nothing to do with her.

Poor Mel, already paid to have the locks changed and now because of that bitch she has to do it again.

Brian and Justin better heal quickly because after Dale is done they're going to want the intimacy they share just to forget the pain from being betrayed.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 12:32 am Title: RETROSPECTIVE CLARITY Part 1

Wow, another fantastic chapter.  But more importantly is that you are healing.  It may take time, but just hang in there and know that all your followers are praying for you to be completely healthy.  Hugs, Marilynne

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