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Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2020 2:37 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

This is the Brian he was becoming on the show...I hate what they turned him into.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2019 6:22 pm Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

So many things I saw wrong about season 5. You are doing so many great things right for our boys. Yes our boys.😊 For they belong to all who love QAF!

Reviewer: Qaf_Freak Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2018 1:36 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

Loving this story and the anti linday anti michael .

Would love to see more of Teddy and Dale amd where their relationship goes. I could even see them in their own story.

Keep up the great writing. Cant wait for the next installment

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 1:06 pm Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

THIS is what I thought would have happened first...glad it happened now but still...Chelle, I totally agree with your closing notes and Brian's character. I much prefer your way than what the writers did to the character of Brian in Season 5! All that back & forth business was bullshit IMO. Well done babe! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 9:40 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

I love your Brian. That's how it should have been in season 5 lovers and partner of Justin not this clone of season 1. Your story is fantastic I look forward to it. I hope the sentence will be heavy for Michael Debbie and Lindsay and Claire. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 5:32 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

Great job I agree this is the only direction for both Brian and Justin and what they should have done on the show. Love this story and can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:53 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

What a powerful chapter! The tension is really high from the beginning till the end.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 4:10 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

Again - WONDERFUL!

It's amazing to see all the emotions brought out by the cruelty of how Michael and Debra manipulated Brian. Emmett, Ted, Mel, Ben, and even Jennifer and Hunter can now see why Brian is the way he is and how he has evolved since meeting Justin. Can't wait to see how that will continue.

It's also amazing to see Brian's heartbreak being healed by the strength of Justin's love and faith in him.

Great chapter!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 3:19 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

Michael got off too easy and Deb still thinks he's done nothing wrong.  Such a shame.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 2:11 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

Debra did everything she could for Michael so she would never be alone and she didn't care how it affected the people who actually loved her without conditions, now she is going to find out what it means to really be alone cause Michael probably still plans to throw her under the bus to save himself and make his fantasy a reality.

Ben and Ted stopping Emmett from giving Michael a new Asshole is surprising cause I thought they would have to stop Ben when the realization came that Michael pimped Hunter out, Lance better not come back to Pittsburgh because he will get a beat down of Epic Proportions.

Since Debra is in delusional land with Michael I think there is still a chance Jennifer can shed her Wasp Mask and take Debra, cause Jennifer looks like she is all innocent but I bet she is a brawler lol ;)

Brian finding his safe haven in Justin's arms is not surprising I think despite all his protesting he knew that Justin would cherish and protect his heart.

He just needed to look inside and ignore the haters to the truth that had always been there, but he tried to ignore, Justin loved Brian flaws and all with his heart he didn't want perfection he just wanted Brian Aiden Kinney.

Brian is opening his heart and soul to a love that really couldn't be denied though it was pushed aside through others selfish machinations, now Brian sees what Justin always saw that he is worthy of love, can love and deserves love unconditionally.

Together Brian and Justin really are unstoppable and now that Brian has opened his eyes he sees that growing up isn't a hardship, loneliness is, and that with Justin, Gus, Melanie, Ted, Emmett, Jennifer, Molly, Vic, Rodney, Ben and Hunter that he is safe and free to be Brian.

And that the haters can't hurt him anymore all the power they once had is gone.

Thank You :)

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 12:56 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

 

Chelle,

I love the way Brian is growing and evolving into a man who knows that he deserves to be loved and that he can love in return. He is finding out that he deserves to be more than an unlimited checkbook to people just because they possibly helped him out when he needed something. He is also finding out who his true friends are and who has just been using him for anything they could get.

~Lorie <3

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 12:45 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

FANTASTIC chapter and I love this Brian.  He has finally grown up and it is wonderful as is the story.  Your writing is amazing and your words convey so many emotions and situations.  Hope that you are improving each day.  One thing for sure, your writing is as good if not better than ever.  Thank you and many, many HUGS !!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

WOW! Marilynn, thank you so much for the kind words! I smile every single time I read your reviews. It's encouraging to know that I'm not losing my touch, even though I've had to slow down considerably. 

There is definitely MORE to come!

Happy Reading and MANY HUGS!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2018 12:38 am Title: IT AIN'T NO GAME. IT'S A LOVE THING (Splatterday continues)

With all the shit Michael has done, pimping Hunter is a new low. I mean he did to Brian all the time by finding him, or talking him into going after some guy Michael knew wouldn't mean anything.

And Debra, blinders and all still doesn't think he's done anything wrong. Even with Vic telling her about him being blackmailed by Claire, paying her with Brian's money by Debra's standards that's okay too.

We know Jennifer never would but I would have loved to see her go after Debra and pull the wig right off her head.

I'm glad Ben is going to take action against Michael for the shit he pulled. But no matter what he better be doing jail time.

Never seen Em so angry. Good thing Ted and Ben were able to hold him back. I think if he went after Michael, all his pent up hurt and anger from growing up would have come to the surface.

Knew Brian would find peace and tranquility in Justin's arms. They're his safe haven.



Author's Response:

Hey Sherry Darling. It's still too soon to tell if Deb will push Jenn to the breaking point. She's damn close though, let me tell you! After all, Justin had to get his moxie from somewhere and his cowardly father couldn't possibly have provided that fiery DNA, LOL. Like Justin, there's no doubt that Jenn will ask God to hold her halo, while she sharpens and dons the horns, Honey!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! And most of all, thank you so much for the well wishes! 

HUGS!

~Nichelle

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