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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 5:08 pm Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

All Praise Kinnetik!!!!!

Brian, Justin and everyone else are about to blast off and when they get down, no one will be able to touch them.

What or Whoever Michael plans to use to distract Brian and Justin will just end up with egg on their faces along with Michael.

This plan has as much chance of succeeding as Michael does of actually getting Brian to fall in love with him <shudders> or Lindsay does of Brian loving her.

So Michael was planning on stealing Deb and Vic's wills and having it reworked so he gets everything?

Love that he thinks he has the right to just come into his mother's house, he doesn't own it because he never paid for it!

Deb did not come running to rescue Michael...Perhaps she really is ready to change??

Lance coming to Pittsburgh is perfect time to put his head on the chopping block and find out how more deeply involved he is with Michael's schemes.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 1:27 pm Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Wow! That's a nice little development! I hope Kinnetik can handle it but I'm sure they can. Ted & Dale sound...fun! lol And Michael, well, what else is new...he's a fucking idiot!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 11:48 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Woohoo it’s time for Kinnetik yay omg Michael for fuck sake get a fucking clue!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 10:02 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Wow, wow, wow !!!!!  I have to say that you are definitely back to the height of your writing.  As I read this, I realized something that I will tell you as truth and not to make you feel good, your writing of Brian and Justin excels what the writers of the series ever did.  You have found a way to make them so much more real than just characters.  You have given them heart and soul which is not easy to accomplish especially when taking over from what someone else started.  And, not only Brian & Justin but each of the other characters as well.  Never doubt yourself, Nichelle, you are a fantastic writer and prove it more and more.  They say there is a reason for everything and perhaps having health issues to conquer, have in some way made you even stronger.  Whatever it is, bask in the sunlight for you have earned it.  If ever given the chance, the COWLIP writers would praise your work and be jealous.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 8:56 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Daphne and Cynthia will make a good team they are motivated and know Brian and Justin very well. Go Kinnetic is ready. What did Michael invent again? Great chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:52 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

I love the way Ted is building his confidence, thanks to Dale.

If Daphne is as good as Cynthia, the foursome is going to accomplish amazing things.

What devious plans are you planning in Michael's head?

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 6:03 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Ted is such a happy little fish with Dale around. A whole new him. And he has a streak of gleeful mischief that he's enjoying.

Ha, Mikey got caught with his hand stuck in the cookie jar and no mommy to help him out. Boo hoo. Whatever Michael may be planning is nothing compared to what will be waiting for him when he shows up in court. He will be showing up in court I don't doubt that. Lance really should stay where he is because he's going to be dragged through the muck Michael is making. I wonder if they'll put friends in the same jail cell.

Brian's and Justin's new company is going to flourish. I wouldn't be surprised if Craig Taylor showed up, not realizing Kinnetik is Brian's and Justin's company. Cherry on the top of the sundae.

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:43 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

Bravo!  Another great chapter.  I love the thought of them being an extreme power couple.  It's fun to think of them running Kinnetik together.  I just love them.  Thanks for all the ups and downs this story has given me.  It keeps me entertained.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2018 4:04 am Title: A VISIT TO MOTHER'S and BECOMING KINNETIK

I think Deb is ready to come back into the fold.  Michael thinks he's got something up his sleeve, but I don't see it succeeding.  Kinnetik is coming into it's own in a big way.

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