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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 8:39 pm Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

At least, Lindsey did something nice and useful.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 4:42 pm Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

Chelle, you are amazing! Can I just tell you how much I love your writing! Jesus, your talent & imagination knows no bounds! You always come up with such great storytelling!

Claire & Caig? Omg not only double ew but holy shit...no one would have ever guessed something as twisted as that lol Yay their all going down! 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 1:53 pm Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

Wow Claire and Craig...Ewwwwwwww!! Never Saw That Coming <Shudders>

Typical of her to come running to Brian to fix her problems, such a shame she ran into Jennifer first <giggles>

So Peter is Justin and Molly's half brother huh?

Did Claire leave him and John with Joan?

Someone needs to get them away from that woman and their mother.

Michael is stupid he totally just buried not only himself but everyone else involved in this stupid plan, they are all going to pay but if they are smart they will rat out Michael and get a one or two years shaved off their time.

I would like to believe Lindsay was being a caring mother but that really isn't her style.

Moving out of the left temporarily is good Brian and Justin need time to deal with Michael's continued duplicity and protect Gus and Mel along with themselves.

Speaking to the press first keeps the story honest and takes away the power Michael and his Cronies have to spin it.

Lance should have ignored Michael cause now he is going to lose it all.

Whoa Your Writing Is Blowing My Mind!!! :)

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 1:42 pm Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

I've run out of things to say that I haven't said before.  I don't want you just hearing blah, blah, blah.  *sighs*

I'll just say that my heart speeds up each time I see you've made a new post.

I love reading these.  Thanks

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 10:41 am Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

Didn't see that Claire angle coming. Wow!

It's hard to trust Lindsay but I do hope she was giving all of that information to help protect Gus.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 8:37 am Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

Wow, another great chapter.  The noose is tightening around Michael's neck, YEAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 8:17 am Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

I hope they will not have any other surprises for anyone who wants to hurt Brian and Justin and that everything is in place for the trial. Great chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 5:05 am Title: PREEMPTIVE STRIKES

It's nice to know that they have everything planned, but why is Michael not in jail.  Filing a false report is a crime isn't it?



Author's Response:

Hey Phyllis. Oh, he's definitely in jail. We'll see what's happening with him, Deb and the rest next chapter. This chapter was mainly about the aftermath, and planning on how to move forward from Brian's POV (which of course will continue as well).

HAPPY READING and HUGS!

~Nichelle

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