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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2018 3:17 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Besides, I really do believe that Brian is out there working to free me from jail, even if it’s behind Boy Wonder’s back. I chuckle to myself, thinking of the look on Justin’s face when Brian tells him what he’s done for me; which Brian will do once he realizes that all of Justin’s scheming and conniving can’t compare to all the lengths I’ve gone to prove how much I love him.

DELUSIONAL...


Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2018 6:13 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Hi again.  Just read some of your reviews. I noticed a couple of viewers referring to:  What about Peter?  They have remember, he is a half-brother to Justin and Molly, also, Brian is his uncle.  I doubt any of them would let anything happen to him.  I also wanted to point out, that I'm glad you brought in a drug-free, settled Blake into the story.  I'm not sure how I feel about the Eric, Troy, and Christian arc. Haven't heard anything more about them in the last seven chapters.



Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

So far, the story is going day-by-day, which is why Eric, Troy and Christian haven't appeared in seven chapters. But there will be a jump in the timeline very soon. Stay Tuned!

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2018 5:21 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Hey Nichelle...  I've read your story, now. I think it's the best one I've read in a very long time.  I usually don't write reviews, which is very wrong of me, and I hope I can rectify that in the future. Authors certainly deserve rewards for the time they invest in their stories, and their creative genius. Yours are truly magnificent. I love anti-Michael, anti-Lindsay, and anti-Craig fics, that are not lenient on the perpetrators at the end on the fic. And, JUST THE TWO OF US, fits that bill perfectly. I noticed you haven't updated the story for 8 days. I sure hope that changes soon.  If when you finish this story, and feel like tackling another, I wrote plot bunny #122, that I feel would be great for you.  My user is different, as I had to make a new account, because I lost my email address for the other one. I would also like to see your other stories finished.  Thanks again, for this amazing story.   Cathy



Author's Response:

Hi Cathy! Thanks so much for reaching out. Your words are so encouraging. You and all the other wonderful folks reading this have fed and nurtured my spirit in ways that i am unable to express in mere words. So thank you so much for the validation and encouragement to keep going.

But just to confirm, I'm still writing this story. In fact, I'm in the process of updating this and a few more of my WIPs. I think I may have finally worked out a posting schedule (God, I hope so!) that will work so that nothing suffers. I would really like tohave all of the WIPs finished by the end of this year. Ambitious? Absolutely, but a goal I am definitely trying to see through. The reason for the delay is that this past week has been a series of appointments for myself and my sons. I'm also looking at my RL manuscripts (two of which are sequels to my published novels) that need my attention again. Ironically, I can't find my very first Chri-fic novel, which was 286 pages in length so I'll have to start that one again from the beginning. All-in-all, it's just been an incredibly busy week, especially with the fact that my youngest son is entering his senior year in high school. Yeah, YIKES! 

Anyway, thanks so much again for reading JT2U. It's been an interesting ride so far, and I look forward to continuing the journey.

HAPPY READING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 9:52 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

So excited to see another update.  Everything seems to be falling into place ( of sorts)-  Claire and Craig together and father of Peter- now that is an interesting twist

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 8:04 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

I get the strange feeling that Bubbles is a plant. I mean he has Michael writing out his confession. Of course he's treating Michael like most of Liberty Ave. wishes they could.  Wah wah wah the big man is abusing me. Change my cell. Wah wah wah. Nice try Novotny.

If there's room, the boys may be staying with Jenn for a bit. It would be good for the boys and Molly all around. I'm sure Brian will have input about the situation.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 1:57 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Time to pay the piper Claire and Craig 

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 1:32 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Well now, that was another action packed chapter.  I'm glad the 'parents' are in custody.  Right where they belong.  

The kids are in good hands.  At least Jennifer is learning from past mistakes.  Just like the rest of us.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:57 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Somehow I feel that whatever Michael does write down the truth won't be part of it.  Jennifer is finally realizing her misdeeds and is doing better.  Carl gets the fun of arresting Craig and Claire.  Wonder where that leaves Peter.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:56 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

First of all, I'm so glad & happy to see that Bubba has shit for brans under control in prison. Yes Michael, you ARE that dumb! Secondly, nice to see Jennifer being so open & honest with the kids, sometimes adults want to protect children from the truth in their own lives so much, that they're not upfront with them. Where will the boys go? And lastly, yes, take those morons to jail Carl!!!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 12:43 pm Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Great chapter.  Love Mikey and his "friend" working on his writings.  Great ideas.  Hope you are feeling well. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 7:12 am Title: WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS, LIES DO TELL

Michael is writing a full confession and getting English lessons: at least he should learn something in jail! Soon, he will have Craig not far away.

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