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Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 4:47 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 12: A MANIFESTATION OF THE GLORY

So love this and thrilled you updated it . Looking eagerly forward to more.🥰

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2020 8:02 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Lindsay miserable! You made my day!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 11:24 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

love a Lindsey bashing

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 1:09 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Nice to see Lindsay brought down a peg or two.  I do enjoy seeing more on this story.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 12:23 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Great update.  Love when Lindsay is miserable.  My two favorite stories getting updated has made my week.  Reading all these wonderful stories has really helped me being in "stay at home" time.  Living alone doesn't bother me, but not even being able to get my mail without mask & gloves is depressing.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2020 12:08 am Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

So Lindsay tried to play dumb and seduce her  Gay Lawyer and got knocked on her ass she should really be used to it by now cause it seriously won't be the last.

Wonder what suddenly has Lindsay never and her hair growing grayer?

She and Claire are really nothing more than over used whores who aren't as good as they believe they are, they also should've never been mothers because they are way to selfish, but no one can really regret Gus, John and w being here despite their supposed mothers and with time, love, patience, trust they can be better people who are accepted for the joy they bring not the leverage they afford.

Lindsay will regretsigning those papers but that is for her to live with Brian and Justin have California to finish with before they can come home to fight their enemies head on.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Stay Safe 😃😃

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 10:45 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Aah... Poor Lindsay's in hot water... I have to wonder when it's all over and done with, if she will ever see the outside of a barbed or razor wire fence... 

Her trying to play ignornant and innocent, is so very funny. There is so much concrete evidence against her, that I should hope her, and the lot of them, would plead guilty, and hope for a sentence reduction.

And it sounds like that's Claires goal. And even though Claire may think she's going to really reduce her sentence by doing so, I doubt that will help much in the long run.

It's too bad it's not recorded of her trying to get her lawyer - gay lawyer - to sleep with her. But, if she hoped that would slow down the process of her trial... well, I don't think that would work.

So happy to see this is heading in the direction of some of the trials. Although, I suppose we still have to finish up in California before Mikey's can get started.

But, thanks for the update...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:38 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

This summarizes Lindsay so well: "I’m much too high class to be in the general population".

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

So beautifully executed. Not just sex, but a,oneness. Two complete souls.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2020 9:27 pm Title: COURTROOM CHRONICLES: CHAPTER ONE: RAT BASTARDS AND THEIR FINKS Take 1

Well played Nichelle. This is one of my favorites. Once this finally completed I want to read it from the beginning. Kudos!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2020 8:43 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

They needed it and so did we! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 9:45 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

thanks for update, hope Michael gets punished soon and Debbie too

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 1:47 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

Wonderful chapter.  Love when our boys are together and happy.  Please, please, please complete this story and not make us wait forever to see Mikey get what is coming to him.  Fantastic writing, Nichelle.  Hope all is well with you.  It would be a 100 rating if possible.  I have found your writing wonderful from the first story I ever read, but I believe it is getting even more amazing.  You have a real talent.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 1:05 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

How did I miss this chapter.  The information alone is worth the read.  Now how do you get Davies to admit why he's being a prick?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

I Love The Glory Of Love that song made me cry the first time I heard it!

Also a big fan of The Karate Kid Part 2!

Perfect Song for Brian and Justin it to totally captures whom they are now and who they will always be.

Michael, Lindsay, Deb, Craig, Sapperstein, Lance and all the other Evil A-Holes have lost cause Brian and Justin are not under their control anymore they are strong to leave The Haters behind Forever.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

What an absolute change in the mood I was in this morning: this new chapter lifted the dark cloud that was over me and my thoughts are lighter.

This was the best way for them to re/connect and take the control on their lives back. As Brian said a long time ago about Justin not going to Dartmouth: there is no turning back.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 4:11 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

I am so disgusted and terrified at the lengths Michael was willing to go have Brian all to himself I mean the sick SOB was going to have Gus killed so there would be no one Brian could focus on except for him, he even had some poor if raped and drugged repeatedly to drive Brian insane just because this young man resembles Justin even made sure to get it on video with his other accomplices.

I do wonder about the young man in the video is he still alive and if he isn't could all three be charged with rape and murder?

Michael is one Sick F$%K!!!!

Everything does need to be processed but if Davies is going to.let his feelings get in the way then he can stay in the office getting paper cuts, while the grown-ups do the hardwork of making sure Michael and others don't get off on a technicality due to.jealousy and spite.

Brian and Justin getting out before watching anymore of those videos is a good thing Brian needs to vent then calm down so later Justin can vent and Val down.

I bet when they get back to Pittsburgh they will be rushing to hold Gus tightly cause no one wants to know what he would have done to Gus who he hated just as much of not more than Justin.

Deb needs to be in court everyday to see and hear what Her Precious Angel was willing to do to get his dream thanks to her help.

I don't want  to know anymore but gotta know more so there is nothing left for Michael to gloat over anymore.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:45 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

Wow, fantastic writing.  Such amazing ideas.  And, just makes me hate Michael even more.  WONDERFUL, JUST WONDERFUL.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:39 pm Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

Whoa! Justin and Gus were planned to die! I can't even imagine what horrible death it would have been. What a sick and pervert maniac! I bet you get that a lot for these chapters.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 2:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

What I wouldn't give to be a fly on the wall when Michael finds out they are doing it raw.  His head will explode.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 12:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

Best chapter yet! I love “The Glory of Love”. It’s perfect for them... 2 honorable men who fight for each other.

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 10:44 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

Well your back with a vengeance. Woohoo what a ride!!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 9:21 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

Nice chapter... They needed the reconnection, and now total belonging to each other, will make them stronger to deal with the rest they have to face.

It almost sounds like Michael suffers from Narcissistic Personality Disorder. He is so majorly fu*ked in the head... yet places all blame for his screwed up thinking on someone else.

You picked an awesome song... and so befitting. On a side-note, I was surprised Ralph Macchio's career fizzled out at such a young age, although he's trying to make a come back.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 8:49 am Title: PRECINCT BLUES: CHAPTER 11: LET'S GO TO THE VIDEOTAPE

They should take Michael Novotny's ass and throw him in a 2x2 dark hole in the bottom of the prison and let him stay there for - at least - a month. Then they can play a video feed that will shine in the darkness of Justin having a go at Brian... also a ring ceremony that Michael will have to watch - OVER and OVER again. That should officially tip him over the edge to somewhere he can never make it back to reality.

Will that video tape be permissible in court, so that Debbie will see and hear all of how Michael planned to set her up, and his ultimate plans for Gus?

When they find the 'architect' who did all this remodeling, I sure hope he gets brought up on charges too.

So, earlier in the story, there were forgery papers found that had Lance stating he was Michael in the event of Michael's death... so, was this ONLY so that he could funnel the money to Michael, or was he planning to double-cross Michael?

And now we have Lorenzo... and Spahn to join the masses going to prison.

I'm worried and concerned about Davies. Even if they let him go, which seems the best outcome at this moment, he could compromise this case - BIG TIME!

Well, on to the next chapter...

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2020 6:06 am Title: CHAPTER 84: BENEDICTION AND RECONCILIATION OF A DIFFERENT KIND

I haven't read it yet but I just want you know I totally appreciate the updates. 

Now on to reading 🥳

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